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- Sun Dec 22, 2013 4:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 479457
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov
You should probably spoiler the Satoru Miyoto bit--that one's supposed to stay under wraps. Noted. And, for the record, the April Fools chapter really isn't part of the canonical storyline--it was done entirely as a joke. I thought calling it the April Fools chapter made it clear enough that it was...
- Sat Dec 21, 2013 8:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 479457
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov
Aaand, we're live. I'm sure someone can edit a better (possibly less spoilerish?) description in.
- Sat Dec 21, 2013 12:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 479457
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov
I'm just about ready to start the page myself, but I need some help coming up with a description for the fic.
- Tue Dec 17, 2013 5:24 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
- Replies: 273
- Views: 94469
Re: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
I'd say Emi. She actually pushes her leg muscles to their limits. That, and she also has arms.
- Sat Dec 14, 2013 12:45 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.
- Replies: 155
- Views: 87912
Re: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.
If she does somehow grow from that, I can't imagine she'd grow into anything other than a hardened bitter cynic.
- Tue Dec 10, 2013 10:22 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1198
- Views: 988776
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route
"Tomorrow's Doom" and "For Want of a Nail", respectively.TheGoatman wrote:I don't think I've read the Aiko or Misha routes though, what are their thread names?
- Tue Dec 10, 2013 9:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
- Replies: 51
- Views: 21251
Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Quite possibly an inaccurate extrapolation on my part, after he mentioned Taro working at the Beijing. My mistake.
- Tue Dec 10, 2013 4:36 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
- Replies: 51
- Views: 21251
Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
The class passes rather uneventfully , with Mutou writing up some simple questions which I finish quickly . Leaving me to stare out the window blankly , my eyelids growing heavier. Overuse of words that end in -ly, I think. (Also, that second sentence sounds awkwardly phrased.) Unexplained lack of ...
- Mon Dec 09, 2013 11:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1198
- Views: 988776
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 12/9)
I like the characterization of Saki here. She's fun.
Haven't read the other Saki route myself, and from what I'm hearing, I'm not entirely sure if I should bother. If nothing else, at least, I don't want to get the two Saki's mixed up in my head.
Haven't read the other Saki route myself, and from what I'm hearing, I'm not entirely sure if I should bother. If nothing else, at least, I don't want to get the two Saki's mixed up in my head.
- Sat Dec 07, 2013 8:45 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Misha's disabillity?
- Replies: 1050
- Views: 369211
Re: Misha's disabillity?
I don't know about you, but the idea of a non-disabled kid studying at Yamaku sounds pretty interesting to me.
- Fri Dec 06, 2013 8:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 35163
Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/19)
I laughed at the Miki bit. "Delicate" my foot. :lol: Just as I’m about to sink into melancholy my Beatrice throws me a lifeline. With a few simple words she brings me out of the inferno. I doubt Hisao would have read that but nice anyway. What is "that", exactly? I'm afraid the r...
- Fri Dec 06, 2013 4:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5871
Re: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
The One Steve Limit exists not because of any connection to the real world, but for the benefit of the reader. It's slightly less of a problem in this case if Akira Satou won't be in the story at all, but there's still the potential for confusion when someone has to pause to recall which Akira they'...
- Thu Dec 05, 2013 4:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5871
Re: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
And is your Akira a boy or a girl? So far it's hard to tell. My gut feeling was "girl" until I read Kyler's post. Actually... that might have just been an assumption on my part. I'm used to thinking of Akira as a boy's name by default. But going back to the text, I can't find any proof to...
- Thu Dec 05, 2013 3:31 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5871
Re: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
Hm... I'm pretty sure dyslexia isn't one of those things that someone would be sent to Yamaku for, since it's a learning disability and not a physical one. Unless, of course, there's something else wrong with him that has yet to even be hinted at. That, or he has something going on similar to Misha'...
- Wed Dec 04, 2013 2:35 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
- Replies: 169
- Views: 1089613
Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
I wish I had been reminded of this before I started posting my own story, but what's done is done. All I can add is that if you're releasing a story in parts, positive feedback can really fuel the temptation to push something out prematurely. Do not give in to that temptation. A weak product leaves ...