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Just read all of the story, up until Chapter 44. You are doing a great job with it. I like the little Hanako-Emi fight going down. They are both trying to get Hisao, but they have helped eachother out of their little holes of giving up multiple times. Along with that, Lilly coming back could be a se...

This is honestly pretty good.

I enjoy this.

Spunky at his Spunkiest.

Thanks for the feedback guys! Not just for this recent installation, but for the rest of them too! I can say I evidently have a problem with maintaining a constant tense, skipping between past and present tense, and also maintaining either a Second or Third person perspective. Something I'll have t...

D,aaawwww
Nice, I loved it

These are just way too good. Keep them coming, please.

Also that one about Lilly's father was pretty amazing.

That was the best. I am laughing so hard and my girlfriend thinks I'm retarded.

First reaction: Oh, well this is nice...

Reads end:

Fuck you.
God damn. I still love you though.

Helbereth. You made me bummed out. I looked at that post and the only reaction I had was



Thank jeebus it was joke

Now that you mention it, that would be a relatively good idea.

You got that backwards.

A bitchin ass fanny pack


(Look at the date)

You better be pulling my leg. You are gonna make a boy cry.

Please.

*crawls in corner and goes into fetal position*

Can't wait for the next part! This story is great. You are doing a great job.

I read this a while ago but I wanted to commend you on it. It's a fine piece and I enjoyed reading it. Good job.

BUT TYRONE MADE IT UP AND HE SAID SPUNKIEST SO YOU SHOULD GO WITH THAT.


ALSO LETS GET THIS THREAD BACK ON TRACK.

feminists...

Even worse.

Also you spelled Spunkiest 'Spunkyest'

You did it wrong.