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Mirage: All those issues, fixed! you have eagle eyes! Also Ayane has been beating me over the head about using purple prose. Which is Ironic as I can't see the colour purple! Cloud: Thank you for the honesty. Mirage has offered to step up to the plate. Ayane wants to keep you in the loop though! To ...

Agreed that Shizune’s reaction is over the top. Japan has a strong social pressure against such public displays of affection. As people have mentioned before, your writing is quite good, but could use polishing. It’s never to the point that your meaning isn’t clear, but it does draw me a bit out of...

Really enjoyed the talk between Ayane and Emi. Glad to see they've reconciled things. Also, I had a huge smile on my face when Ayane brought up the bet she made with her brother, and his reaction prior to the kiss was hilarious. Shizune's reaction is a little over the top(kissing him back is fine, ...

Part two of Shake, rattle and roll I must look an odd sight, sitting on the boys’ dorm steps, reading an English fantasy novel. I only manage half a chapter before Hisao gets back from the nurses office. “That was quick” I remark as he opens the door for me. “It’s just a check up, make sure I’m not...

This scene was brought to you via the musical strains of Globus and their Epicon album and Heavenly and their Virus album. Enjoy! (Also I got distracted by Mirages fics) Next update will likely be wednesday! ------------------------- Act 2 Scene 7 ‘Shake, rattle and roll’ It’s another night of broke...

I wanted to drop by and say that I've been enjoying the story to date. (For some reason, I keep reading Akihiro in Gordon Ramsay's voice...) Anyway, It's always good to have decent KS fanfiction to read. -falls over laughing- Oh god, now I can't get that mental image of Hisao being in Hells kitchen...

I’ve just finished brewing the tea and taking my pills when the door knocks. It does? Interesting doors they have there ;-) Besides I’m assuming you have a plus one invitation in there too?” Arashi gives me a single hesitant nod. Not a wise move if she intends to marry him off to somepne particular...

Wow, Ayane's mother hasn't even made an appearance yet and I already hate her as much as I think is possible. To me, she is the worst sort of human outside of the actual evil ones(like Hitler and the like). Why are OC mothers in fanfics always so terrible? Honestly, that thought process dominated m...

Part two of scene six: Don't have to settle no goddamn score My phone is flashing when I get back to my room and I flip it open. It’s a text from Hisao. The phantom sensations of his lips on mine flitter across my skin and I feel a smile tugging the corners of my mouth. The text is short and sweet....

AN: 6k, in two chunks. Here we see some of the family dynamics begin to emerge from the woodwork and Hisao gives Ayane a small telling off. (A gyoza is a type of Japanese filled dumpling) ---------------------- Act 2 Scene 6 “Don’t have to settle no goddamn score” I’m awoken at half past eight in th...

azumeow wrote:Hahaaa. Shirou and 'Saber', of course!

Ah, well he's simply asked her out for a drink unless of course you think they've met before apart from the bike incident!

azumeow wrote:And they're dating now, it seems. Don't think I didn't catch that, Mr. leaf. Don't think that for a moment....

Ah mr/ms meow the question is whom are you referring to?

Don't worry, it wasn't obvious, I just happen to have very sensitive yuri goggles. The slightest thing tends to set them off haha. Ah a connoisseur of the the yuri varieties I see. That explains it XD Huh, my mistake then. We use "queue" in German, and I simply assumed English uses the sa...

Hoped to continue my post from earlier but you were too fast... Two more things to add: One, it's strange that Hisao knows his way around the city enough to choose a bar and second you play pool with a queue. All that is bery much nitpicking, though. Good job with the chapter! I don't remember ever...

Pin-striped suit? Are we thinking of the same saber? the interaction between my sister and I ...my sister and me Given that her father is a touchy subject, referring to her brother as the oldest male in the family is quite audacious... Hisao calling out Shirou on trying to date his boss' sister is ...