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So far this is:
-Somewhat confusing as I never read marvel comics.
-Contains Kenji's ever-entertaining rants.
-A few grammatical mistakes.
-Is absurd.
-Is entertaining.

Yup, this has me interested.

If you have to do this, you shouldn't be writing at all. Yeah,good point. I probably should go back and edit in a description of it. I got lazy and I wrote this in a very non-serious way. Probably shouldn't have written it at all. *EDIT: I added in an actual description of the space marines. Katawa...

Chapter 3: The Offer The next 30 minutes of the period passes in a series of unfocused, yet informative, ramblings from the teacher, Mutou. As much as I love science and that I normally find it easy to comprehend, the fact that we started lessons on the first day is a little odd, this causes me to b...

It looks like the writing is alright, but I've had enough of these types of stories lately, I might come back this in the future though.

I got the COD4 and Deus Ex Human Revolution references, along with what I think is either a Warhammer or Starcraft one. And there's no need to be ashamed of the crossover bits, my KS fics are all crossovers :| Yes, COD4, Deus Ex Human Revolution, and War hammer were in there, no star craft though. ...

Well, it wasn't done by me, but I appreciate the effort and the fact it inspired Beoran to write something, anything. That and BlackWaltz making art are something I'm really proud of; that a little story I wrote helped others create something of their own. As for the ending, I'm still on the fence....

AN: This is a one-shot spoof. Hopefully it isn't too painful to read. _____________________________________________________________________ The ringing in his ears is painful, but welcome as it lets him know he can still hear at all. Not everyone gets that luxury after having their Jeep blown up by ...

This has my attention. Please continue.

Looks alright so far, I'll probably keep an eye on this.

I've never seen Dr. Who, but if it's on Netflix I might watch it since I'm loving this fic so far hope to see more soon!

Glad you liked it. i wasn't sure if it was very good, but I'm glad it is. And I fixed those two phrases. I admit I have trouble editing my own work, and since I don't have anyone else who can proofread in a reasonable length of time, some things are bound to slip by me. Let me know if theres any ot...

Very good, and a good portrayal of a 'what if' scenario, though there are a few mistakes, or poorly worded parts. He had screwed beyond repair up with her That sounds a little awkward. "He screwed up beyond repair with her." sounds a little better, but still a little clunky. It was impress...

I'd probably do it, just to see where it went, but I wouldn't like it, at all. It would probably give me the nega-feels

Engineer? Well, that's... interesting. Though I wonder what he'll talk about as a teacher. Probably just something about sentries and the like. Well, the man has 11 PhDs, I'm pretty sure he'll have more to say than that. And there's a reason I introduced him into the story to begin with. He is the ...

Interesting speculation. As BobBobberson mentioned, these would be great if expanded upon. The only correction I would offer is that Atlanta actually has an active gay community. Still, the stereotype in the US south exists for a reason… I live in Metro Atlanta and go into the city often, there see...