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The problem I had was that even though the reader made the choice to be reasonable Hisao still went and did the same stupid thing and had to be saved by circumstance. Wait... was he still going to do the water balloon thing in the good path or just rub it in her face that he cheated on her while th...

Very cool fic you have here! Hisao was a bit off from how I usually think of him (and I still don't understand what the hell he thought stopping the elections would accomplish in either ending), but the pacing and other characterizations were great. Feels very much like a solid continuation of the S...

...is that a pillow fight?

and no, I'm not just using poetic language.

I suspect that comes down to the line between good-natured teasing and being an ass, and how one frames the situation can change that drastically.

So his mistake was more or less the same one Hisao can make on her route, eh? That works. I'm liking this guy, and liking the fic in general. Good stuff, Worm.

what kind of person would hisao be if he let a dog die for financial reasons? Rational. Also Hisao and Ritsu pretty clearly don't work, so this boils down to feeling heroically charitable with their parents' money. Funny how it's always much easier to give away resources that you didn't earn, isn't...

This chapter... I don't get it, man. I mean I like dogs but come on, this is ridiculous. Hisao tries to get himself killed to help some random dog that's been hit? Dude, heart condition on top of the whole running into traffic thing. And ditching class for this adventure? Nurse should chew his ass r...

A jerk? His motives are rather transparent of course, but he doesn't deny them so it's all out in the open. Honestly Hisao was getting on my nerves this update for trying way too damn hard to play the roll of "nice, supportive and understanding guy." Mix that with obviously putting Akira o...

That's too bad... I rather liked my wrong interpretation. 'The girl who cried Rin', so to speak, hinting at possibly a long history of mutually understood fictions with one truth sneaking in by accident. As intended it's significantly less interesting.

It was the "play both sides at once" bit, along with "produced" and putting friend in quotes. All this added up to give me the impression that she didn't know Rin existed outside of Miya's head but that she liked this charecter because of Rin's complete transparency. The possibil...

I meant to imply that Miya's mother actually met Rin, in much the same function as she met Hisao now. Huh. For some reason I was under the impression that was a phonecall sort of meeting and that the mother mistakenly thought Rin was actually Miya pretending to be her own friend, for the mother's s...

This whole discussion is wildly out of place here and probably ought to be trimmed out and sent elsewhere by a moderator of some sort, don't you think? I can appreciate the creator's wishes to not have the game treated as just a pile of 'exploit-ables', and that really should be respected. That said...

That's fairly close to the picture I had of her, though without the 'expecting to be murdered while asleep' bit was a new addition. Hiding behind honesty, but what she's really hiding is herself from herself: all the 'facts' about a person still don't tell you what's really important about them... h...

I can't take that chocolate thing seriously enough to even hold it against him though. That was the author having a derp moment, not the character.

Fairly cute fic. Emi's art pushed it over the top though.