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This was a good read. I'm not sure why, but making Shizune a bigger bitch has somehow made her a more likable character in my book.

I like how you've expanded on Mutou like this. Not sure anyone ever has, at least in the stories I've read. Very well done, sir.

This was really good. The only other fic where I've seen ANY of the girls being a vicious bitch was "Class of 2017" by FluffandCrunch (Saki was a bitch in that fic too). I like the concept you were going for with the endings, something more real-world than the happily ever after these thin...

I really enjoyed this. Miki and Suzu make such a cute couple.

I laughed so damn hard the first time I read this. The sheer awkwardness of the situation, and the constant reminders to stop pointing. Top notch stuff.

I think you're doing an excellent job of making her father an unlikable bastard. Is there a plan to have him evolve as a character, perhaps after he finds out about his daughter's true health? He's a little two-dimensional, acting as an overbearing father/husband who might do what he does due to lov...

"Good...morning." I hesitantly greet. "Eh, something like that. How are you today Hisao?" He answers back with a dull look in his eyes and a half-hearted grin. "I'm doing fine. Apparently, better than you're doing." I chuckle back at him. I hate to kick a man when he's...

I agree with the others, super cute story.

This is very well written, and I love the new angle with Rika's personality. Since everyone goes off the idea of her being a risk-taking nihilist. It's nice to see her vulnerability and the way Hisao has adapted to her. Keep it up. It's good.

I like this new version of Rika. She's so vulnerable and confused. Well done.

I remember reading this and getting to Chapter 20 and saying: "This is a good time to bring things to a close, probably close to the end of the story... wait, what?" That's when I saw the chapter count that went up to 60. It was daunting, but well worth the read. This is exactly the sort o...

That was really sweet.

The Akira pseudo-route is my favorite, to the point where reading this made me genuinely sad. It was well-written and enjoyable, but that twist ending is gut-wrenching.

This was really well written and I'm glad I found it. I like the Bad Ending as well, it didn't depress me like a lot of them tend to do, but I like how it's A) Hisao breaking up and B) fixable, in that the relationship could be repaired (unlikely, but possible). That makes it fairly unique from what...

This was a fun little read. Miki has good characterization and it's nice to see some interesting male OCs. Keep it up.