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by Oddball
Thu Jul 30, 2020 1:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 403074

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Before Yamaku)

https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png One of the hardest parts of the book club is coming up with a nice clever opening. So anyway, this is a story. Yeah, I got nothing this time. Before Yamaku - the events leading up to KS by TomokoNoKokoro. This is just a short one-shot focusing on right before Hisao's...
by Oddball
Thu Jul 23, 2020 6:23 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Rest in peace, Raide
Replies: 10
Views: 2657

Rest in peace, Raide

https://i.imgur.com/5uO78rk.png You may have already heard this else where, but Raide has passed away. I'm probably not the person that should be making this topic here. I didn't know Raide, I don't think I ever interacted directly with him, but somehow knowing he's no longer with us hurts. He crea...
by Oddball
Thu Jul 23, 2020 6:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cross-Pollination (Post Lilly GE, lewdfic)
Replies: 6
Views: 1306

Re: Cross-Pollination (Post Lilly GE, lewdfic)

I suppose realism and characterization wasn't exactly a high priority for this story, still the set up felt nice and the characters were in character up until Hanako asking for sex.

For what it was, it's not bad.
by Oddball
Sat Jul 18, 2020 11:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Thoughts after having played the game
Replies: 4
Views: 1361

Re: Thoughts after having played the game

That's not to say all those traits aren't still with him, but I just felt like the Hisao that ends up in art club is noticeably more gloomy than the Hisao that ends up going down to the track to run with Emi each morning.
Of course he is.

Rin is a lot worse at cheering people up than Emi is.
by Oddball
Sat Jul 18, 2020 2:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Thoughts after having played the game
Replies: 4
Views: 1361

Re: Thoughts after having played the game

Of all the good endings, the one in Rin’s seem to be the most “up in the air” as such, in regards as to how we individually might interpret whatever possible future her and Hisao might have together. I actually thought Shizune was the most up in the air. With Hisao and Rin they had finally reached ...
by Oddball
Tue Jul 14, 2020 11:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 128680

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]

I know I'm probably being quite annoying with all of my recent comments around here recently, given this forums age and declining viewership, however I think it's amazing this game is still drawing people like me into the universe of fanfic (which I had previously had no idea was so good). Forgetme...
by Oddball
Mon Jul 13, 2020 11:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 403074

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200713 Scarred Angel)

The only people I've seen use the word "lewd" have been weebs overexposed to pornographic doujin. I thought about commenting on that as well. I've never heard lewd except from the anime set, but I wondered maybe if that was just me. Another one on a similar note that gets me as when people describe...
by Oddball
Sat Jul 11, 2020 10:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 403074

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Scarred Angel)

https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png It's that time again. I know you were all looking forward to it. Now let's all read Scarred Angel by Beoran. It's a "Hanako & Lilly erotic triangle," so if you don't like erotic triangles, you might not care for this one. If you're okay with regular triangles or erot...
by Oddball
Sat Jul 04, 2020 4:15 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1323
Views: 353022

Re: Blooper Reel

"...one bed bed" Little typo there, Oddball. ... You know, I'd actually fixed that typo and moved on to the next image, but then had to click undo a bunch of times to roll it back because I noticed a DIFFERENT typo I needed to fix. I guess when I rolled it back, I went a step too far. Can't win for...
by Oddball
Sat Jul 04, 2020 2:31 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1323
Views: 353022

Re: Blooper Reel

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by Oddball
Thu Jul 02, 2020 11:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 3/31/2019)
Replies: 36
Views: 13773

Re: Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 3/31/2019)

It's a very interesting story. The fact that you're telling us Rin's thoughts, but not having it in first person is a nice choice. It allows us into her head just a little, but still keeps us distant enough to not fully understand her. Rin seems to have found herself another Emi and another Nomiya. ...
by Oddball
Wed Jun 24, 2020 1:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 403074

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Queens of the Land)

https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png I'm going to try to make an effort to not loose track and have more consistent updates from here on. Ideally, you're going to be looking at a new story (or two, or three) every other week, give or take a day or so depending on how my days off line up. We'll see how l...
by Oddball
Thu Jun 11, 2020 8:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beauty and Other Stories by Scramblers and Shadows
Replies: 9
Views: 2143

Re: Beauty and Other Stories by Scramblers and Shadows

You're a wonderful writer. I don't want to sound like I'm just cheering you on or anything, but you are really really good. There's a strong sense of emotion in your stories. I wasn't so much reading them as I was able to feel them happening. The flow, the atmosphere, everything is just perfect. Bot...
by Oddball
Mon Jun 08, 2020 5:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 403074

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Three stories!)

Decided to try something new. https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png Let me know what you think of the new logo. I'm not attached to it so if anybody wants to mess around and come up with a different one, let me know. So... on to the stories. I didn't update at all last month. (I'm a bit behind on my stori...
by Oddball
Sat Jun 06, 2020 10:54 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Opinions on Iwanako?
Replies: 8
Views: 1932

Re: Opinions on Iwanako?

Yeah I figured as much. That makes her easy to use in fanfics lmao. I'm gonna write my own too.
Go for it!

Although I will recommend staying away from writing how everybody hates Iwanako because of what happened and her life is hell now. That's just a touch overdone.