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by Oddball
Tue Dec 29, 2020 12:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter Lantern - Rika Pseudo Route (Prev. known as Evolution Fuel)
Replies: 11
Views: 2200

Re: Evolution Fuel - Rika Pseudo Route

I have no problem with the pacing, although Hisao's more depressing monologues feel like they repeat themselves sometimes. Rika seems like a nice enough characters. I am sad we didn't get a Kenji scene before he meets the girl for the festival though. That's tradition for these stories. Also one thi...
by Oddball
Sat Dec 12, 2020 10:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 1305

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

I'm not going to beat you up over grammar or spelling or anything. Anyone that knows my works knows I'm the last person that should be criticizing anyone else of that. I just felt like saying that because it seems like what everyone else is jumping on. I didn't see any major problems. The story was ...
by Oddball
Sat Dec 12, 2020 2:22 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Another general opinion about Katawa Shoujo...
Replies: 8
Views: 1644

Re: Another general opinion about Katawa Shoujo...

I mean, the forums aren't really active that much, but they still get posts on a regular basis.

I'm not exactly sure where you draw the line at what's considered active and what isn't.

It's certainly not like the old days, that's for sure ... but to be expected.
by Oddball
Sat Dec 12, 2020 10:14 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Spinocerebellar Ataxia
Replies: 5
Views: 789

Re: Spinocerebellar Ataxia

I can just picture Saki going, "Wait. I'm going to live? Man, that just throws a monkey wrench into everything I had planned." Think of all the fanfic authors: "Wait. She's going to live? Man, that just throws a monkey wrench into everything I had planned." :lol: That might just be a bit more accur...
by Oddball
Sat Dec 12, 2020 12:32 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Spinocerebellar Ataxia
Replies: 5
Views: 789

Re: Spinocerebellar Ataxia

I can just picture Saki going, "Wait. I'm going to live? Man, that just throws a monkey wrench into everything I had planned."
by Oddball
Sat Dec 05, 2020 7:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 403114

Re: Yamaku Book Club (The Ooe Way: A Natsume fic)

https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png It's time for a story about everyone's favorite member of the new paper club. Maybe their second favorite. Not counting Hanako. The Ooe Way: A Natsume fic by motokid108. The writing itself isn't that great, but it's a nice way to get Naomi and Natsume to notice Hisao...
by Oddball
Sat Dec 05, 2020 7:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Where is my Mind? - A Kenji One-Shot
Replies: 3
Views: 633

Re: Where is my Mind? - A Kenji One-Shot

It was a nice fun little Kenji romp.

The part about trying to remember where you put your glasses hits home too. :wink:
by Oddball
Tue Dec 01, 2020 8:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route
Replies: 5
Views: 1002

Re: Mirror Image - A Rika Pseudo-Route

See, I think I was too locked in the headspace of 'if this was an actual route he would have described her in the prior scene and thus it's not needed here', but with hindsight and having it pointed out that might not be the best for narrative content. This is your route now. If you want something ...
by Oddball
Wed Nov 25, 2020 1:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.
Replies: 15
Views: 2055

Re: A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.

This is a very nice read. There's a wonderful sense of mood and emotion here. It's certainly not what I would have expected from the prompt you started with. Out of all the dream(?) scenes, I think Emi's works the best, as it more accurately covers the past and Hisao hasn't quite figured out what is...
by Oddball
Mon Nov 23, 2020 7:49 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1323
Views: 353058

Re: Blooper Reel

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by Oddball
Mon Nov 16, 2020 10:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 403114

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20201107 old silly stuff)

https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png We're going to look at a bunch of old silliness this time around! Old stuff is always fun. Sometimes. Let's start strong with some by one of the devs. lawl by Anonymous22. This starts out as an actual serious erotic scene, and manages to do a really nice job of it, b...
by Oddball
Sun Nov 01, 2020 4:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 403114

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Just Live)

Okay. I skipped out on October because I was busy doing my Halloween things elsewhere. I apologize. If I do it again, feel free to yell at me. Now let's move on. https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png Let's move on to ME! Come on, you know I can't resist spotlighting myself every once in a while. (Plus tha...
by Oddball
Mon Oct 26, 2020 8:54 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: So I drew Rin (First tablet drawing)
Replies: 5
Views: 2801

Re: So I drew Rin (First tablet drawing)

Not too shabby for somebody that's just starting.
by Oddball
Tue Sep 29, 2020 12:20 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Some Emergancy commission goodness
Replies: 4
Views: 824

Re: Some Emergancy commission goodness

it's not really my style, the noses make them look like the Chipmonks, but otherwise it's cute.
by Oddball
Tue Sep 29, 2020 12:20 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Classic theme for the forum
Replies: 2
Views: 661

Re: Classic theme for the forum

Glad to see this actually on the forum now, so if I do something and end up deleting it or switching computers I won't have to hunt it down (again.)