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by HenryT
Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]
Replies: 23
Views: 8477

Re: A Clean Sheet (OCxLilly) [Jan 14th]

Well, I am done planning the first act, now I just need to figure out the exact dialogue to use. Let's say the first act, Hisao is practically a second main character :D Also, here is a VERY quick drawing of Frank Martin (without glasses, I can't draw those at all) : http://farm9.staticflickr.com/81...
by HenryT
Mon Jan 14, 2013 4:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]
Replies: 23
Views: 8477

Re: A Clean Sheet (OCxLilly) [Jan 14th]

Well, first of all, thanks for even posting. I hope I don't sound too depressive, but all critisism helps, be it positive or negative. :D As for the Eastern Europe being cheap comment, it's mostly there as an example and also, if you try to go from Tallinn, the capital of Estonia, to say, Calais', G...
by HenryT
Mon Jan 14, 2013 2:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]
Replies: 23
Views: 8477

Re: A Clean Sheet (OCxLilly) [Jan 13th]

First of all, thank you for the response. As I said, this was a quick two hour write for an idea that I didn't want to lose, so it's definantely not the best idea ever. Though it felt good enough for some better evaluation, so I posted it here, for more experienced writers than me to assess and give...
by HenryT
Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]
Replies: 23
Views: 8477

A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]

Chapter 00 - Session I knock on the therapist's door. "Come in, please," a voice of a young female answers. I step into the room, as Miss Inori gestures me to sit down. I take a look around the room. It seems more like an 18th century study than a hospital room - the floor is covered with...