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- Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]
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Re: A Clean Sheet (OCxLilly) [Jan 14th]
Well, I am done planning the first act, now I just need to figure out the exact dialogue to use. Let's say the first act, Hisao is practically a second main character :D Also, here is a VERY quick drawing of Frank Martin (without glasses, I can't draw those at all) : http://farm9.staticflickr.com/81...
- Mon Jan 14, 2013 4:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]
- Replies: 23
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Re: A Clean Sheet (OCxLilly) [Jan 14th]
Well, first of all, thanks for even posting. I hope I don't sound too depressive, but all critisism helps, be it positive or negative. :D As for the Eastern Europe being cheap comment, it's mostly there as an example and also, if you try to go from Tallinn, the capital of Estonia, to say, Calais', G...
- Mon Jan 14, 2013 2:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]
- Replies: 23
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Re: A Clean Sheet (OCxLilly) [Jan 13th]
First of all, thank you for the response. As I said, this was a quick two hour write for an idea that I didn't want to lose, so it's definantely not the best idea ever. Though it felt good enough for some better evaluation, so I posted it here, for more experienced writers than me to assess and give...
- Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:04 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]
- Replies: 23
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A Clean Sheet [Locked tight and shut]
Chapter 00 - Session I knock on the therapist's door. "Come in, please," a voice of a young female answers. I step into the room, as Miss Inori gestures me to sit down. I take a look around the room. It seems more like an 18th century study than a hospital room - the floor is covered with...