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I'm interested to see if they see Iwanako and how you write her and, how you write mr satou

I was kinda expecting her to come to fight, I mean that's in her personality to do so

To each their own

Got to say I really enjoy the story, I love divergentsise like this that end with Hisao ending up with one of the girls in a different way then the story, although I agree that chapter 4 seemed a bit over the line

It doesn't matter if it wasn't there first language that just means they need to take the time to learn it wich means that sometimes they are better then use. I'm sure as hell mirage is better at grammer then I am and I'm not "offended"

Wait what? Can I get a link?

If I understand right you are asking about the main route, Rin does not kill herself in any route or ending

Why? It's just a phone number. There really is no reason to get worked up over it except for some cheap clichés. And I don't think Emi completely withdrew from the competition. She's in shock because of Hisao's close call, but you can't fall out of love just like that. With what Hisao said in this ...

Man when she found the note I expected some anger or sadness

No offense taken mirage, I flat out told him that I myself need a editor so all I can do is check for ooc moments and non cannon things, even then he still gets final say, I can't even edit the doc

I think I'm getting a bit to much credit ^^* I'm not really proof reading more beta reading and pointing out not grammar issues

The last day at hisaos parents house made me tear up, great story

Did Akira actually say "«I can learn to resist... anything but temptation...»"?

Very very interesting. I can pictures he next chapter in my head. All I have to do is wait and see if my guesses are right :3

Found this thread for the first time, hour and a half well spent XD