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After some thought I think I've figured out why I dislike the ending; I had trouble with the notion that Hanako would suggest surrogacy, and then follow it up with "oh by the way, I totally betrayed your trust in a moment of extreme selfishness." Quite apart from questions of whether that...

Depends.
Are they girsl you see in teh background of the game?
Mite be cool.

Totally original characters of your own design?
We'll have to see, but take it slow; a whole new character requires a lot more work that just borrowing an established persona.

Darling was a bit annoying after every single line, but with milady its gonna be even worse. It might just be me, but I think that Saki calls Hisao ''darling'' over and over again because she thinks it is amusing. As in, she's a minitroll regarding that particular name. Absolutely. These two are na...

Thanks for the criticism. Perhaps the ending was resolved a little too quickly on Hisao and Lilly's side, but I always thought the ending was self evident from practically the beginning.

themocaw wrote:I'm tempted to write Hisao/Hanako/Lilly threesome porn now.

Well, I did say I might write an Epilogue, didn't I?

Alternatively you should do an epilogue set ten years in the future from the POV of their collective child thinking about his two mamas.

...I like that idea.

On topic, I don't mind the ending but it seems a bit backwards to me. I would think the confessions would come first, and discussion of surrogacy after. Offering to do something that important for someone right before you tell them you betrayed their trust doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Still, ...

Part Nine I spend the rest of the day on the computer, getting only a few hours sleep before work. Like it has been the last few weeks, the routine of getting ready for work is spent in silence, the three of us just trying to keep moving. Several times I catch Lilly or Hisao looking at me as if the...

Someone asked for a pic of Akira's cleavage. I couldn't help but oblige. Here's my lame ass art of Akira (attachment). I think I can see where the story is going. I'm not entirely sure if I want to be proven wrong. So as usual, I must wait for the next installment. Happy writing! Cheers, BlackWaltz...

Mahorfeus wrote:I want to say I can see where this is going, but that's what I said three chapters ago.

I don't think it was ever much of a secret.

Part Eight "Can you hear me now? "I can hear you, but I can't see you! What the hell is wrong with this thing?!" "I can't see you either, just be patient, it might be buffering. Is it buffering on your end?" "What the hell does buffering mean? Oh, God, what is this, I'...

Love it, love it, love it!

An interesting change to how the relationship progressed.

I always assumed Hanako took Lilly outside for girl talk.
Needless to say, what was exactly said will remain a mystery to me for all time.

Part Seven Over the next several days, Hisao and I take turns staying at home to keep Lilly company. Neither of us say it, but I get the idea Hisao might be worried Lilly could hurt herself, accidentally or otherwise. Both he and I contact Shizune and explain the situation to her and Misha. The two...

Oh, good God, you guys are making me really nervous now.
I pray I can deliver.

Thank you, BlackWaltz , for pointing out the misspells on Hisao and the tag. I believe a story is like a diamond; the more polishing, the brighter it shines. And thanks to everyone for the compliments and tips. It's keeps me going. Note: I am not a Doctor. I am relying on prime-time television medic...