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- Sat Feb 25, 2017 10:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 53426
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 2
Two wonderful chapters of course but I'm a little confused about the part where they brushed cheeks. Was that supposed to be a hug or just her getting close to whisper that phrase?
- Tue Feb 21, 2017 11:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 9750
Re: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
This is really cool that you started it off from Hanako's bad end! It makes sense that Miki is the only one he would talk to as well considering he talked to her during Hanako's route. The writing was really good as well, great job Chaos!
- Tue Feb 21, 2017 7:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20425
Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2
I have but this one definitely has a different feel to it.Jake Zero wrote:Someone has apparently not read Sisterhood.
- Tue Feb 21, 2017 2:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20425
Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2
This is very unique continuation of Hanako's good end, not something I've seen before. I really like it, it definitely seems like a real possibility in canon too!
- Tue Feb 21, 2017 1:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1197
- Views: 955689
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)
Hoping everything works out for you, Eurobeat!
- Mon Feb 20, 2017 12:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 139468
Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 2/20)
Fluffy is a good way of putting it, acquireTigris, but I really liked the chapter. It still felt like their was some unspoken progress in their relationship as hinted by the old lady.
- Sun Feb 19, 2017 4:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 53426
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 2
Great chapter, I wonder how the fireworks go
Pretty much how I pictured Natsume:InSaiyan wrote:"Ha! It's okay Hisao. What's u-?" Natsumes cheerful voice cuts off with a small gasp as her eyes lock on to the unicorn on my hands.
- Thu Feb 16, 2017 5:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 53426
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 2
You're such a tease but I really like where this is headed so far. I wonder what this 'research' is really gunna be.
One more that I think Mirage didn't get:
One more that I think Mirage didn't get:
Her hands are locked together in front of her hips?Her hands are locked together in front of hips
- Thu Feb 16, 2017 10:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
- Replies: 51
- Views: 28906
Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 2/11
That and all the times I see Mrs. Nakai hate on the girl he brings home. That got old really fast.gibzx wrote:I mean, how many times have we seen Hisao's parents being depicted as generic japanese businessmen?
- Thu Feb 16, 2017 10:37 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
- Replies: 35
- Views: 19487
Re: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
This story is really cool so far, and its good to see Rika finally branching out in the latest installment!
- Thu Feb 16, 2017 3:49 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
- Replies: 76
- Views: 49109
Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15
I cannot verify the medical accuracy of this chapter so I'll just smile and nod :wink: This is a pretty decent chapter, finding out more about Hisao's conditions. We also learn more about Nakata as a person... he's unique? Definitely interesting to read through, it's odd to see the 'good-guy' Hisao ...
- Thu Feb 16, 2017 3:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]
- Replies: 55
- Views: 23551
Re: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]
Your depictions of the characters are definitely unique, but I like it. I don't think Hanako is too OOC here, she does join the newspaper club normally anyways, and she didn't seem overly social here to me anyways.
- Thu Feb 16, 2017 2:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mask Off: A Molly Route (Update 3/8)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 43713
Re: "Can you open your mind?" A Molly Route (Update 10/21)
The chapter was good overall, but the shopping section dragged on a bit - with four or five stores and listing what everyone was looking at for each of them. While I can understand this to a point, I feel like this helps us understand the characters in this fic a bit better in terms of who they are...
- Wed Feb 15, 2017 12:15 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Footsteps Of A Friend
- Replies: 19
- Views: 8516
Re: The Footsteps Of A Friend
Pretty good read and definitely very unique. I must agree with Silentcook about the walls of text however, I recommend taking a look at Mirage's tips in the fanfic tips topic. Edit: I'd also like to say this made me rather sad to read through and figure out what happened. Especially the death of His...
- Wed Feb 15, 2017 1:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
- Replies: 76
- Views: 49109
Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 7, 7/
Well at least you predicted it right?ComeWhatMay wrote:
I just got roasted by Silentcook. Fitting, I suppose.
Love the writing by the way!