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Very True what you have said above and I do agree with. Hisao can only be developed so much or least at risk of deriving too much from what his character is. As long as enough details and developments are there, it works well enough I think. I'm just a sticker for things like this and of opinions th...

Oh of course, Hisao is very passive and reactionary, it's a big part of his characterization in the game and it needed to be kept to here as well for reason you have mentioned. That I have been good with since Hisao being proactive too soon would not work and rush his character development. I just b...

Right Commentary time. Lots of great moments in this chapter, Chisato as ever just makes ever scene she is in stronger, from wanting her bag, to throwing it like she had just gotten home from school. I bet it was some sort of stuffy Pikachu bag or some line, it would just fit Chisato perfectly. To f...

Will provide my full chapter commentary later on today as I'm at work currently. But I have to say that you have outdone yourself this time euro. And congrats on getting your spot at the convention for next year, hope you managed to sell a few of your work. This story is going from strength to stren...

Take as much time as you need to do the chapters. We are very patient and more than respect that RL must always come before our reading pleasure. Hope your back get's better soon and that the medication doesn't continue to be a massive pain in the ass to deal with. Hope the convention goes well for ...

Looking foreword to seeing the next chapter soon.

Also congrats on getting a new job, hope it makes you happy and will not deprive you of too much time and energy to write.

Apologies for the late commentary, my pc is being upgraded at the moment so I haven't kept my eye on this forum as I usually would. That and work keeping me busy as well haven't helped in me nothing you had updated til now. Anyway a moving to the chapter. Another fine chapter that was laced with so ...

Reponses to your post. We're still here :D We're a small but dedicated bunch Indeed we are Grats! Hope it goes well for you. Thank you, I think it will go very well. I'm glad you liked her here. She's rapidly becoming one of my favorite characters to write. Glad you picked up on the pump dilemma. T...

Perfect timing mate for you to update, since today I got myself the sort of job I want to do and getting decent pay for it. Now time for my chapter commentary. Nice quiet chapter overall that allowed a slice of life pacing, action and banter between Hisao, Saki and their other date companions. Hisao...

Very nice, can't wait to see what comes next.

Indeed, less is more I think when it comes to stuff like that overall. So when you do scenes like the final scene of Hanako's route, it's much more powerful and emotionally fulfilling.

I thought Hisao acting the way he did in the chapter made sense when you consider how passive he generally is. Not to mention his behavior matches how he is on As EJB said in Hanako's route, but also in Lilly's route as well where he knows deep down in Act 4 there is something going on with Lilly. B...

Stuff between Misha and Saki would be interesting to see that's for sure, the way the two's personalities, issues, place at Yamaku could be contrasted and also what could go down between them could lead to quite the one shot.

Of course as you say getting it to work is the challenge.

Oh dear, as you say best to get it done now rather than when it will hurt more, whelp getting old can suck, at least your still young enough to grow old. I thought you got Rin and Emi down fine, felt IC to me overall and Emi lines sounded Emi to me. As did her concern for Saki. Ah another lover of t...

Well worth the wait, don't worry about how long it took, your health comes first, hope the surgery your having isn't too severe and hope it all goes well for you. Okay time for my chapter commentary, you haven't lost your touch one bit. I liked pretty much everything that happened this chapter, from...