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Well Scissorlips you've done it again, you will now have me hanging on tenterhooks until the next chapter comes out :P Brilliant writing as per usual and I like that you've brought Kenji back into the mix, As always I very much look forward to your next chapter! Thank you! I agree, it's nice to get...

Sorry if I'm a little brief, it's... very, very late right now. I know and like the feeling of letting a story tug you in unexpected directions, but I can kind of tell this chapter wasn't planned. Not that it was bad at all, it just clearly had very little impact on the story as a whole. It's border...

Short Cut / Detour To the relief of the entire class, our teachers decide to have mercy on us and ease back into things. We mostly just review the stuff that we went over before the break, instead of diving headfirst into new material at a breakneck speed. I, um, don't even want to think about how ...

Summer's Gone A series of sharp banging noises drag me from my slumber, I remember that I exist and I'm alive and... and I'm in bed. Oh, what I would give to hold on to that last one. Well. All three of them, I guess. I groan in protest, the morning light is a dull red glow against my eyelids, this...

Interesting song choice. Now that I reflect on the lyrics, very cool :D good work sir! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. My second choice was the song "Charlie Brown" off the same album, it also has some fitting lyrics and a really good piano section at the end, but the title would have b...

Paradise “So, hey. You.” I give the girl sitting next to me a nudge, she raises her head a little slowly to blink at me. She does that slowly too. She's obviously dragging, Suzu hasn't gone dark once all day long and it's really starting to get on my nerves. “What. What?” She mumbles, looking like ...

Finally. I've finally caught up on this goddamned story I've put off reading for far too long. I don't really have much to say other than the usual "That was feelsy, blah blah blah, Scissorlips, you magnificent bastard, you, blah blah blah etc." Honestly, though I have to admit the inclus...

Again, it's late, and my weak excuse for arts will have to wait until tomorrow. I enjoyed this update and it's interesting to see the plot moving in noticeably different directions from before, and it's also neat to speculate about what might remain unchanged in either version. Here's a few thoughts...

Even if you do update once in several blue moons, I have to say that when you do, it's consistently really, really good. The prose is flowing and tight, descriptions are vivid, and both Hisao's thoughts and your dialogue have a great balance of being believable and appropriately dramatic. What you d...

Thank you for this piece, it made quite a great Halloween addition, and the action remained gripping right to the bloody end of the second to last chapter. I don't know if absolutely every detail that was included near the end was needed--hauling the body back, hauling it to the woods, burying it, a...

You mean she still doubted that? It's been quite obvious for several chapters now. Good point, but as Helbereth mentioned, it was more of a confirmation thing. A line that could have been trimmed, but I admit that I liked it. I registered just so I could provide some comments on your fic after read...

Even in the Manly Picknick route there are some scenes with Hanako and Lilly that you cannot avoid, for example in Lunch Evolution Theory or in Cold War. Depending on the exact route Hisao took to the manly picnick there might be more. As he said he never joined the student council, he probably als...

Okay, it took me a little bit to get caught up on this, but I have to say that it was definitely worth it. To be honest, your narrative and descriptions have a tendency to lumber along, falling into somewhat repetitive sentence structure and dialogue that can come off as clunky. But then you get to ...

This is completely and utterly hypocritical to say, but I am always grateful that you post in such small, easily digestible chapters. This was an enjoyable little couple of scenes, I chuckled at the dig at Hisao's sweatervest. I'm pretty sure that Tanabata is a sort of "Japan in general" f...

Nice art, that's Hbz's work, right? Neat.
Well, this is a thing that's happening and I'm still okay with it. Keep it up, Banda.