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Nice work.

those that needs should be those that need "Good morning Akio." He greets me should be "Good morning, Akio," he greets me. "Good morning Kizo." I replied should be "Good morning Kizo," I reply. (fixed punctuation AND tense. I am assuming you intend the story t...

Very good story. I took like two attempts to get seriously started on it for some reason - I think mostly because I could see from twenty kilometers away that this Sho fellow was going to end up with Hanako (or at least I thought I could), and I didn't care about him. But then I forced myself to sto...

Well, this is among my favourite KS stories that I've seen so far. Yeah, the resolution wasn't entirely unproblematic, but I still enjoyed the hell out of it. Oh, wow. I decided to read the thread before posting and saw that thing about the ban. Real shame. So, I guess, no point posting specific fee...

...that's a nice figure.

Very nice. But yeah, pricey.

It's kinda sad that in the hypothetical world where the devs' feelings are fully respected, it doesn't exist.

I've seen this in multiple stories, so I thought I'd point it out: there's a temptation to overuse the phrase "can't help but". Especially during sex scenes, for obvious reasons, but also outside them. I think using two of these in one 2k-words chapter is already pushing it. I've seen two ...

Oh, I missed it somehow. Thanks.

Excellent story. In-character, well written, interesting to read, and quite satisfying as a happy (but not emptily-so) continuation of the good end. I particularly liked how the sex scenes were sweet but also a real part of the story, in spirit of the original game. The only thing that I think would...

I like this a good deal.

Though I have to agree with Kayo that it doesn't fit canon well if you pay attention to details. But with only a bit of squinting I'm able to enjoy it as an alternative look.

I certainly hope this hasn't been abandoned.

I like this Alot.

Oh wait, it's Lilly. Well I like this Lilly.

That doesn't happen with omniscient perspective because the narrator is either an over-the-shoulder entity, or one of the characters looking back, and they know everyone's thoughts. If this were a past-tense or 3rd person story, this kind of confusion wouldn't work, but since we're live inside Hisa...

I see. I think doing it that way is being unnecessarily clever for the story's own good, but maybe it's just me. And Shizune doesn't care that it's a little white lie. A lie is a lie. It doesn't come across as a white lie, just sarcasm. Another way of saying "none of your business, Shizune.&quo...

Well this is nice. Normally Misha triggers my "kill it with fire" response, but your fic is making me kinda like her. A rather enjoyable read. "You shouldn't be doing naughty things on an empty stomach" made me smile. So did a bunch of other things. Makes me wish I didn't find wr...

a.k.a. Art: who needs it? I just finished Rin's route, as the last one of the five, and that's the question that's been stuck in my mind for like the latter half of it. It particularly hit me when those exhibition people started asking her questions that must have made her feel like "what the h...

Very much looking forward to more of this. I'm curious what you have planned. I imagine Lilly would want to do something about her realization but I suspect I'm going to be disappointed if Hisao falls in with that, or at least too easily. The way you've described what he and Hanako have - it comes a...