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Hope things come back together for you soon. I'm cheering for you!

Meanwhile, in neutral ending land, our heroes have a quick discussion...

Big thanks to rtil for drawing to my whims. Some different things should be coming in the approaching months

I can't glide to you if I can't see you!

I was honestly not a big fan of the concept when I first read what it was. But your writing immediately drew me in and I read everything you've written. This is really unique and I'm very curious to see where you'll take it. I'm beginning to comprehend just how rough the concept must be now conside...

Kindred Spirits on the Roof if you're into that kind of thing. Steep price tag but there's a free demo available that should tell you whether it's written the investment or not. Less a VN than a story with pictures and music, but very good stuff all around.

Oh no, I missed Lilly's birthday by five minutes

I could just pretend to be uh, Central instead of Eastern, right?

This is a really bold crack into writing for this series, and I must commend you for that. It's a side of the story I haven't seen looked at specifically before, and something I might even need to hash over in my own way in another story. I can't offer extremely specific criticism at this point of t...

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Perfect

Nice to see you're back. Seems the changes to previous chapters really were minor, since I didn't find myself inconvenienced by not rereading them :-) Yeah, the biggest change is that I made the end of chapter 4 different. Not only did this improve the writing overall, but it gave me more to work w...

Chapter Six Part Two So that just happened. Now I’m left with nothing but my thoughts and the results of my experiments for the next week, it seems. I suppose I could add talks with Kaede to the list, but after this unexpected episode of awkward, I can’t imagine she’s very eager to talk very much. A...

This next chapter is a bit bigger than the others. I probably should have broken chapters 3 and 4 up into separate posts as they're both 4k words each, but at almost 5.5k for this chapter, it was unavoidable. Here's hoping all of this dialogue is as annoying as I think it is :D Chapter 6: They Did P...

Finally got back to being caught up. I have to say I half-expected them to get down and dirty after that little wake-up joke :D Of course, the more unexpected and enjoyable side of the chapter is the great reveal. Not too much ceremony in regards to it, which I'm not sure I entirely buy given how l...

For those about to read: I'd just like to remind you one more time that chapters 3 and 4 have seen relatively minor edits that changed the course of this story, but ultimately should make those chapters roll off better. If you find yourself confused because I'm not addressing something important in...

Are those sparkles from love at first sight or is kenji just blind as a bat? It's a mystery. Oh Lord that is just too precious And I just now noticed the Stenography book. This is especially humorous after playing in the pit for Thoroughly Modern Millie for two weeks almost two months ago. :roll:

Good news everyone! After an incredibly long hiatus, I have chapter 5 in first draft mode! I'm putting it into proofreading right now, but just to bring it to everybody's attention; Chapters 3 and 4 are a little different now! Some of what happened during the first draft of this story has not actual...