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- Sat Jul 10, 2010 2:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
- Replies: 36
- Views: 14828
Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
I have to say I didn't like this fic as much as others on this forums. The main reason for that is the way you handle Hisao, the protagonist... Yes, Hisao is a bit shy, but the in your story, he beats Hanako at her own game - and I'm not talking about chess ;-) The reader is supposed to be able to i...
- Sat Jul 10, 2010 4:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A change in plans (Continues on page 3!)
- Replies: 49
- Views: 18141
Re: A change in plans (Continues on page 3!)
Very cute story. Two things had me grinning: 1) That a school with over a hundred disabled students would have only one bed in the medical station and 2) that the nurse thought it would be a good idea to put (out of all those students) - the girl who freaks out every time someone gets close to her a...
- Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Katawa Shoujo Superheroes: Because, why not?
- Replies: 26
- Views: 15654
Re: Katawa Shoujo Superheroes: Because, why not?
Hanako: My first thought was, of course, some sort of invisibility, but that seems a little too easy for some reason. So we give her fire manipulation powers. Ultimate Yandere , now twice as hot and probably twice as crazy. Have fun. ...And she freaks out everytime she has to use her powers... Actu...
- Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: KS Shorts
- Replies: 233
- Views: 1126144
Re: KS Shorts
Just finished reading your "shorts". Most of them are quite good, some are only so so and the last one has the potential to be excellent. My favourite so far is "Misinterpretation" :roll: A tip regarding your spelling and grammar: you did really improve since the beginning of the...
- Fri Jul 09, 2010 5:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Leaving the Past Behind
- Replies: 47
- Views: 19925
Re: Leaving the Past Behind
btw, the full names of the culprits usually aren't published in the media... maybe "Luke F." or something You sure about that? My... cousin's full name was published in newspapers when he killed both his parents and a neighbor that came to investigate. That's where I got the idea for the ...
- Fri Jul 09, 2010 4:56 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Broken Dolls (OCs) Prequelitis, Page 6
- Replies: 88
- Views: 40889
Re: Broken Dolls (OCs) Prequelitis, Page 6
I loled at "optional chilled cupholders" . Are there really wheelchairs that have those?
- Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Leaving the Past Behind
- Replies: 47
- Views: 19925
Re: Leaving the Past Behind
What I find hard to believe is that a girl as determined and competitive as Shizune would not have tried to learn to speak much earlier. She isn't the type to just relax and continue to depend on Misha, if she had a chance to overcome part of her disability. Oh! Two plot holes in one post! That's a...
- Thu Jul 08, 2010 6:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Leaving the Past Behind
- Replies: 47
- Views: 19925
Re: Leaving the Past Behind
First of all, I think I could like the Shizune in your story. She's a lot nicer to Luke than she was to Hisao though - and that has to be an understatement... You know, if my parents sent me off to a school for the disabled they probably wouldn't expect me to bring home a girlfriend either. The way ...
- Thu Jul 08, 2010 4:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Thank God for Hangovers
- Replies: 173
- Views: 57192
Re: Thank God for Hangovers
Haven't played it - I don't usually play shooters - but it sounds suspiciously like Left4Dead
- Wed Jul 07, 2010 5:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: KosherBacon's writefaggotry: Lilly, Hisao, Page 18
- Replies: 282
- Views: 133776
Re: KosherBacon's writefaggotry: Most Common Anime DisabilityPg8
Wow... Great stories! Very nice plot twist at the end of "Like a Shampoo Commercial" :D I also like the way you handle your characters, even if you like to bash my favourite one... I know I'm part of a minority here^^° BTW, I like your Rin in "Twenty Eight Pills" better than the ...
- Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Thank God for Hangovers
- Replies: 173
- Views: 57192
Re: Thank God for Hangovers
Really like the Story.
You'd think Luke would have prepped his parents for Hanako's scars though. OK, it makes for more drama this way
PS:
Persona 3 is a cool game, but Chihiro was the only SL I didn't manage to complete in my playthrough^^°
Have to get started on P4 sometime...
You'd think Luke would have prepped his parents for Hanako's scars though. OK, it makes for more drama this way
PS:
Persona 3 is a cool game, but Chihiro was the only SL I didn't manage to complete in my playthrough^^°
Have to get started on P4 sometime...
- Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Constant Companion
- Replies: 24
- Views: 21794
Re: Constant Companion
I see someone else found out how easy it is to get on Kenji's path, by trying to pick the IC answer when talking to Lilly...
Anyway good writing. Spot on for Misha, a bit less so for Rin.
I'd love to find this in the game as an easter egg
Anyway good writing. Spot on for Misha, a bit less so for Rin.
I'd love to find this in the game as an easter egg