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by SirKaid
Fri Feb 13, 2015 4:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 875263

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Shades of Distinction)

Hello there, I went a way for a while. If anybody want to take the reins, i'm afraid I have lost the spark. PM me if you would like to make your case for taking the book club over. That leaves me feeling a little sad. It was one of the first things I encountered when I first came here. :( Hmmmmmm, ...
by SirKaid
Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 418571

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-9-5}

I'm like six thousand words into a thing. Unfortunately, crippling depression, untreated ADHD, etc etc. Thanks for the love! Depressed ADHD people represent! :D Extra love, this is a thing I enjoy, and I'm sure I'll enjoy any other things you happen to make. You do have a positive track record when...
by SirKaid
Mon Dec 29, 2014 1:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 127876

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Dec 25th)

Personally, I find the "variations on a theme" style repetitions kind of interesting. Sure, the same basic events happened in both paths - Miki raced and got second to Emi in everything, she was convinced to help the other team, she bailed on the awards ceremony - but the reasons and emoti...
by SirKaid
Sat Dec 27, 2014 5:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 480608

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12-25-14)

Talk about fantastic Christmas gifts! I'm glad to see you're back in business, even if updates will be sporadic due to babies. Well, time to put this on my reread list.
by SirKaid
Mon Dec 01, 2014 4:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99568

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

"No promises." I say. With a small wave, I leave the room, feeling the weight of my guilt lift off my shoulders. I bound down the I think you dropped half a sentence here. There was also an "alot" earlier in the chapter, should be two words. Nitpicking aside, this was an enjoyab...
by SirKaid
Thu Nov 20, 2014 4:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99568

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

My first thought was sun blindness(I'm pretty sure thats a real thing). I can confirm that abnormal photosensitivity is a thing. I've got a mild case of it myself - it's painful to be out and about on a bright day, but it's not so bad that I can't just wear sunglasses and function or that computer ...
by SirKaid
Mon Nov 10, 2014 3:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 41702

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Three Up]

I've got to echo the others about the last scene. It felt very real. Kudos.
by SirKaid
Mon Oct 27, 2014 10:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 139833

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 10/26)

I really like Kento, he's got a lot of character. Here's hoping he becomes a semi-recurring character; after all, Hisao needs better guy friends than the conspiracy nut. Not that I don't like Kenji, but you can't really be friends with someone you don't respect. Oh my, does Kento have a crush on Han...
by SirKaid
Mon Oct 20, 2014 9:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 480608

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (April 1 "Update")

Don't cry because it's gone, smile because it happened.
by SirKaid
Sat Oct 04, 2014 12:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 480608

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (April 1 "Update")

It's been six months without an update, it's safe to call it dead.

I mean, don't get me wrong, I'd be delighted if I was proven incorrect with an update, but I'm not holding my breath.
by SirKaid
Thu Sep 11, 2014 5:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 418571

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {UPDATED 2014-9-5!}

I think the similarity between Iwanako and Rin, at least to Hisao, is more in the negative space. Hisao thinks of them both (at least up to the heart attack) as mysteries to be uncovered and deciphered. We don't see much of it with Iwanako due to her extremely limited screen time, but the opening sc...
by SirKaid
Sun May 25, 2014 1:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 712928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

It's been a heck of a read, kudos. I like how you ended with the obvious parallels to the start, it really drove home how Hisao has changed from the man he used to be.
by SirKaid
Sun Apr 13, 2014 8:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 712928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

It's interesting. Despite his antagonistic role, this chapter has made me really like Mr. Satou. Through his frustration he comes across as someone who really does care about the wellbeing of his daughters, even though he's going about it the wrong way. He places too much importance on the company a...