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Okay, glad I skipped ahead to find out other readers’ reactions to the choice point; no need to go into that. That’s a really shitty move on Miki’s part to make a test like that. Her brother gave her lousy advice. The air conditioning hit me, its contrast to the warm spring air of the early night o...

General consensus dictates that I remove the kiss. And done.

You start thae chapter in Suzu's room and then jump into a flashbackwithout any warning. I suggest either separating the flashback somehow (****) or putting it in past tense. Failure on my part for not editing properly. The whole "test" thing is quite far-fetched and not really in charact...

Let's all give Hisao another point for completely fucking up. Again. Enjoyed that, but...eh, not a fan of how that played out. Again, I blame the Master of Romance. I'm not quite sure which bungle we're talking about. But yes, Hisao made quite a few slip ups. But, as we all know, no one can stop th...

I hope Miki doesn't take too long to make a decision because one of my least favorite story elements in a romance is "I can't decide whether I like you or not so let me think about it for a week". I didn't like it when Hisao did it in Developments , so I doubt i'd like it here. It also lo...

My, this.... moved fast. I enjoyed the scene. The drunk speech seemed slightly off to me, but I'm having trouble understanding why. Also, early in the first part, I think you forgot the word "tongue" I think the line was "suzu sticks her out at me playfully" I don't really know ...

Push her away. I cup my hands in her cheeks, then pull her face closer to mine, our foreheads touching. I am breathing in the same air as her. Our proximity makes me blush. I know my body is raging and urging me to feel hers, but I slowly shake my head. "I can't," I whisper. "We're b...

Kiss Her. All that liquid courage makes my hands move before my thoughts do. I pull her neck down against me, my eyes close, and our lips meet, mingling together in a mix of slaver and alcohol. Our noses rub awkwardly, our kisses a little sloppy, but I pay little mind to that. It's the moment that ...

Unmasked I have no idea how Miki talked me into all of this. All three of us are sitting in Suzu's room right now. Why it was her room that Miki chose, I'm not so sure. I think it's because of all the stuffed animals scattered everywhere that make the place cozy, albeit extremely messy. What we're ...

teeming. Fix'd. So nobody did the third lap? Or did Emi run two? I only just recently Google-foo'd the mechanics for relay races. I assumed you only needed three members per team. Whoops. but Miki gently grabs her and starts pushing me towards the same side as me. Copy pasta for the loss. You shoul...

Suzu does! As for awkward, that's not going to be the case. Suzu's a big girl. I'm sure she can handle a little heartbreak.

The little crush does make the relationship between the three interesting.

Form I have to admit, I'm glad that I don't have to wake up earlier than I'm supposed to this weekend. My new sleeping habits are starting to make everyone else seem like they've been partying all night. I'll be happy to get an extra hour's rest. Realistically, I wake up the same time I did yesterd...

It's all good. Whatever little details need ironing I'm more than willing to brush out. It's not detrimental to my writing anyway. If anything, the nitpicking is improving it.

Didn't know the wonder twins had the same height.

I think 4LS may have overestimated their weights a bit. Asians tend to be waaay lighter than that.

Human physiology is the darnedest thing. The same somebody from high school weighs 45 kg and is 5'2". She doesn't look underweight either.

Wait, how tall is she? The only KS character with a canon weight under 100 lbs/45.4 kg is Emi, and Emi is absolutely tiny AND is missing legs. I was figuring that Suzu was probably about the same height as Shizune or Misha, just a bit lighter. She's no Emi. There is no established height for Suzu a...