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Also, as an aside (mainly directed to Lost in the Fire), I'm not sure I'd be allowed to post a sample of the character voices I use in my story. I asked Silentcook about it after my post about it got deleted, but he hasn't responded yet, so for now I will err on the side of caution and not post any...

dewelar wrote: And, for the record, my Mutou is somewhere between Jeremy Irons and Alan Rickman -- a fairly deep, laconic voice.

That voice. I must hear it, as it sounds fantastic for the character.

She who bares, wins. Okay, that was terrible. I had to pause after reading that. That was beyond terrible. Another great chapter. Still hoping this falls for Hanako, but as the chapters seem to be more and more Emi leaning as the story progresses, I feel that is becoming less and less likely. Then ...

Things are definitely going to get uglier from here, that's for sure. But, not grimdark ugly, just dark ugly. Like I said earlier... All I'll say in that regard is... while sometimes destruction can be bad, it can also allow rebuilding something stronger in its place. So you are going for a darkest...

Welp, I am a little disappointed in myself that it took me this long to stumble upon this thread.
Really enjoyed the stories, especially Photo Session.

Damn. The last two chapters were definitely intense. I found the nightmare from Ch 22 fairly painful to read and the scene with Emi and Hanako in the library was very intense. Over all I am still pulling for Hanako at this point, but as with everyone else here I can't say I want to see Emi rejected ...

Welp. Watching Hisao figure out what was going down was like watching the loading bar on an old video game. It will be interesting to see how Hisao goes about confirming his suspicions withe Hanako.
As always a great chapter.

Hot damn this chapter was good. Not only did I find the Lilly PoV a lot more enjoyable, but that ending had plenty of power behind it. Looking at how the current pieces stand, we have: - An Emi who is already working on winning Hisao, with a moderate degree of success I would say. - What appears to ...

Its really entertaining to see the various characters piece everything together at their different speeds. I want to read the next chapter to see who figures out what next.

Well now. Hisao seems to be ready to step on any number of land mines. It appears that he may already be well on his way to an event that will mirror Hanako's bad end and he may still have to deal with Emi's issues as well.

The plot thickens.

I feel bad for Hisao. Whichever way this goes, someone he cares about is going to be hurt. Well... there is one solution... but I rather doubt it will go that way. If you're thinking what I think you're thinking then I hope it doesn't go that way. I think he's thinking three-way. That is what I tho...

I feel bad for Hisao. Whichever way this goes, someone he cares about is going to be hurt. Well... there is one solution... but I rather doubt it will go that way. If you're thinking what I think you're thinking then I hope it doesn't go that way. One of the things that makes this fic so good is th...

Very enjoyable chapter and definitely one that really sets up Ch 13, which as Blasphemy said is probably a Hanako perspective.
Looks like all the pieces are now on the board, and it will be interesting to see if this pushes Hanako to strike first.

Hmm... I liked the chapter, but if I were writing this story, I'd face a problem pretty soon: Emi seems to be taking the initiative in getting close to Hisao pretty fast. I assume you'll keep the suspension as to who Hisao will decide on going for a while longer, though, and I simply can't imagine ...

One of the things that has really drawn me to this particular story is that each chapter so far has had a different character's perspective. This really works in your favor when building the suspense of the oncoming relationship as it shows the various characters picking up the clues at different po...