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by Helbereth
Mon Sep 08, 2014 10:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 182429

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update

I had always wondered where the hole in the fedora came from.

I really ought to go back and finish reading these. Yes, I know... how disappointing that I, your frequent go-to editor, have yet to finish reading one of your seminal publications.

I've been busy, dammit!
by Helbereth
Tue Sep 02, 2014 7:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 890763

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Classroom Game)

Comrade wrote:nerdsnerdsnerdsnerdsnerdsnerdsnerds
I feel like I'm the one who started this argument, but I have to agree with Comrade. They're just words, people, so calm the fuck down!
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 31, 2014 10:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 890763

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Classroom Game)

When NASA --or the modern equivalent -- has to scrub a mission mid-launch, what would you rather they call it? When Obama accidentally hits the red button -- starting the countdown to nuclear holocaust -- and some tech-savvy super-geek manages to shut it down at the 1 second mark, what would you say...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 22, 2014 7:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
Replies: 35
Views: 14235

Re: Living With a Blindside...

Regardless of the VN's release date, all events in KS take place in 2007, not 2012, which is when 4LS started development.
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 17, 2014 5:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 482221

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/02/14 ~ Reactivated

Loving the story so far, I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Really loving the characters, there is so much more to them than I first thought. :) Thanks, I think that's the point of any story; if I told you everything right from the beginning, the rest would be pretty boring. I really hope y...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 12, 2014 3:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422189

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}

Leaty wrote:My next update is currently 8,000 words, and will be easily another four thousand words long before I'm finished with it. With last minute revisions, it could very easily go up by another one thousand or two thousand words.
Yeah, well, I was doing 14,000 word chapters before it was cool. 8)
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 11, 2014 5:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 739952

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

Leaty wrote:While we're on this tangent, I will admit that the OC I'd find most tempting to use seriously in MTB is... Naoko from TD. Such a fun character. I love her cheerfulness.
I'm not sure how long ago this was written, but I'd be fine with you (Leaty) using Naoko if the chance presents itself.
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 11, 2014 5:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 58228

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC)

Helbereth's Aiko is barely missing running into Scissorlip's Suzu.
Actually, in my own head-canon, and in the story itself, they've crossed paths twice.
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 06, 2014 2:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422189

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

I believe the term you're looking for is 'shoujo-ai'. I've heard that term actually has pedophilic implications in Japan. I'm not sure if it's true, but in general I don't use the phrase. Wouldn't a more accurate term be 'woman-love' (I would try translating that to Japanese, but I'd probably just ...
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 03, 2014 6:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422189

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

Honestly, I'm bothered that people conclude things about characters based on little evidence--or at most the circumstantial kind. It's fine deciding--for the sake of a deviation designed to explore such a situation--that a character's preferences can accommodate different kinds of sexuality--be it h...
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 03, 2014 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422189

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}

Erthos wrote:I'd really like to see who (if any) Iwanako would end up with.
I'd just like to see how her story plays out; I don't think romance is a requirement.
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My first attempt at a pseudo route (criticism welcomed)
Replies: 4
Views: 2728

Re: My meagre attempt at a pseudo route (criticism welcomed)

I'm going to go ahead and skip trying to tell you what you did wrong - Oddball and Mirage already covered the major points. Instead, I suggest that you do more reading, and really pay attention to how things are written. Get a sense for how sentences are constructed, where punctuation is used, how p...
by Helbereth
Thu Jul 10, 2014 11:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 94032

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Birthday Update

This may be the shortest thing you've ever published here. It's poignant, though.

As for their still being in college and unmarried when Hanako was pregnant... didn't you figure that out when you wrote out the basic backstory?
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 01, 2014 11:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 482221

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/02/14 ~ Reactivated

griffon8 wrote:Shouldn’t Hisao be a part of the crew?
The character select only shows the captain and four crewmembers. Kenta and Hisao are in there.
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 01, 2014 7:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 482221

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/02/14 ~ Reactivated

U.S.S. Empirical Data Check back for the first time in a few weeks, this is what I see... I'm in tears laughing again, people at the DMV must think I am insane shuddering and crying in the yellow line. The best part about this, for me at least, is that you can't even explain it to them without soun...