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by Lap
Sun Aug 05, 2018 7:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 143
Views: 98317

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

Hanako's favorite joke is The Aristocrats, but she never tells it because Lilly finds it really offensive. Instead, she practices her delivery in front of a mirror when she's alone. It's the only time she never stammers. Okay, that's the best 3-sentence KS fic I've ever read :D . Obligatory on-topi...
by Lap
Fri Jul 27, 2018 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63358

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)

Just found this, was skeptical at first of a mystery/thriller KS story, but boy howdy did you pull it off! Wonderful stuff, thanks for a fun evening's read.
by Lap
Thu Jun 28, 2018 2:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unexpected Visitor
Replies: 8
Views: 4157

Re: An Unexpected Visitor

Rin's dialogue is very good - one or two lines had me read twice until I got her meaning. Success! :) I'm not personally familiar with someone without arms, but I'd like to think Rin is a bit more self-sufficient than you portrayed her in this story. Oh, I think Rin is plenty self-sufficient (e.g.,...
by Lap
Thu Jun 28, 2018 10:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unexpected Visitor
Replies: 8
Views: 4157

An Unexpected Visitor

EDIT: This short piece is a portion of a chapter of a longer work, now completed, called Home , available to read at https://archiveofourown.org/works/15614520/chapters/36254490 _________________ Testing the waters, here. This is a scene from a longer work-in-progress that sorta stands on its own. ...
by Lap
Fri Jun 22, 2018 10:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 93211

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)

Okay, you got me on eleventerhooks for what comes next...

Though if Hisao ends up leaving Lilly to reunite with Shizune in the end, I may never forgive you.
by Lap
Fri Jun 22, 2018 8:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 143
Views: 98317

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

"An Unusual Friendship" is understating it... it's such an unusual friendship that I avoided this one for a while, it just sounded too weird, but I'm glad I gave it a shot. You're making it work, somehow :D. Can't wait for more!
by Lap
Fri Jun 22, 2018 8:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 999428

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/22)

Lovely chapter. Dunno why, but I'm always a sucker for Iwanako reunion/reconciliation scenes, and this one worked well.

But... the cliffhanger! Arrrgh! I hope the next chapter is in the works!
by Lap
Wed Jun 06, 2018 5:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 999428

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/6)

I was having a crappy afternoon, decided to re-read the most recent chapter as a pick-me-up. Lo and behold, a new chapter appears! Guess I should have crappy afternoons more often if that's going to be the result. But seriously, thanks for the story.