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“Hello, hello there, Lilly!” I needn’t think twice to identify the owner of that voice. I’d recognize her tea kettle tone from anywhere. “Welcome, Emi. I’m glad that you could join me today. Please have a seat.” I motion for her to sit across from me at the table. No sooner had I done so than I'm st...

“Cats and Dogs, Snowflakes and Stars” Writing: Chatty Wheeler Proofreading: MexicanPsychopath ——————————————— Contrary to the widespread myth, it is unlikely that every snowflake is unique. That doesn’t mean they’re all identical, but it’s within reason to believe that a good many are alike. After ...

Quite an interesting take on a possible epilogue to Hanako's route. I read both parts on Crud's blog, and I really enjoyed both. Short, effective, and very well written. Crud definitely has writing chops to spare. Everything else that I could say has already been said by BristerXD and woohootouhou, ...

Greetings brythain, MexicanPsychopath, and BristerXD, Thank you all for reading my story! I really appreciated seeing and reading your comments. My apologies for not saying anything for so long. I've been working away at my Secret Santa submission. Now that I have some free time on my hands, I thoug...

Hey Talmar, I'm really stoked to see another scene being posted here! I needed a little break from my own writing, so I thought that now would be a good time to read Scene 9. Here are my thoughts! ——————————————————— Scene 9: Intermission In terms of plot, this scene is relatively light. In terms of...

After a short walk—made even shorter by Shicchan apparently attempting to set the new ‘100-meter power walk’ record—the three of us find ourselves at the entrance to the library. As we walk through the door frame in a single file, Shicchan takes a deep breath, I let out a deep exhale, and Hideaki wo...

“The Learned Fool” Writing: Chatty Wheeler Additional Writing: BristerXD Proofreading: Xeraeo ——————————————— [Wait a second, Shicchan~! ‘No noise’ means that I can’t speak or sign?] [Yes. No noise means no signing.] [Oh~… I guess that means I’ve already lost by having to ask, huh?] “Wahaha~!” Shic...

Chatty Wheeler's One-Off Collection ———————————————————— The Learned Fool Release Date: January 11th, 2021 Genre: Slice Of Life, Humor Word Count: ～5500 Words ———————————————————— Cats and Dogs, Snowflakes and Stars Release Date: January 31st, 2021 Genre: Drama Word Count: ～11,500 Words Notes: Subm...

Hello ProfAllister, Nice one! That was a charming, if a touch bittersweet, story. I like how you worked in some lines and descriptions from the original visual novel into this story. The way that Iwanako exclaims her love to the tape seemed very similar to Lilly's confession—maybe even word-for-word...

Hello Mirage and Brythain! Thanks for taking one for the team and getting the ball rolling on S11 for the rest of us slackers. :wink: —————————— Christmas at Rock Bottom (Mirage): This is very well done, Mirage. This is a fascinating story with a lot of fascinating ideas—all of them presented natura...

Hello NuclearStudent, I have some downtime right now, so I'm finally able to come back to these forums and take a look at some stories that I had on my radar. This one was on the top of my list, so let's get started! On the outset, I haven't read Learning to Fly yet, so I won't be able to draw compa...

Hello Capn-Cold! Welcome! It's always good to see new writers making their debut on the scene. I'm still fairly new here myself, and I'm working on my own first story, so I know how tough it can be to step up to the plate for the first time... But for your first time, you did quite well, I would say...

Hello Xeraeo! Long time no see, eh? At least here on the Renai, that is! Anyway, I told you at some point in October that I'd get to Rebound at some point, and I'm here today to make good on my word. Let's get cracking... —————————— Prologue: Starting off with that brief prologue... I thought it was...

Analysis of Time Is Dancing ——————————————————— Hello Feurox! It would appear that I am a year late to this party, but I've finally dipped my heels and toes into the world of feels and woes. I'm not sure I can say much that hasn't already been said by others about this story, but regardless, I'm go...

Cell phones were still new—and expensive—in the late 2000's/early 2010's... Hey, it's not that bad. I got a cell phone in '99 and I was one of the last people in my class to get one. It must been different where I live. Most folks I knew didn't get cell phones until the late 2000's/early 2010's. :D