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Can't believe I haven't already commented on this piece, but I suppose now is as good a time as any. As I have found out on my own, writing slice of life presents its own unique challenges. The first and most daunting, in my own opinion, being able to pack plot development and characterization into ...

Love the new edition, good as always. In my opinion, your Mr Satou comes off more believable than fluff's. While both certainly are massive d-bags, your interpretation is a bit more down to earth. He is an over the top character, I think, no matter how you slice it, but his motives seem justified in...

Don't let the feminists stop you now! /salute I shall do my best. On an on topic note, this chapter was significantly less stressful to write. The past few chapters always left a sour taste in my mouth after writing. Not because I thought they were bad, but because of the emotions I would have to c...

And we return you to your regularly scheduled programming... Chapter Seven: Evasive Action I'm awake. I know that much. Although, that should be a fairly easy thing to discern. I mean, I suppose I could be dreaming. But I'm not. I'm awake. But something is wrong. My new found nemesis has yet to make...

Hey there folks, just wanted to check in. I know it has been expressed here, and many other places, that the readers don't mind delays and what not, but that doesn't stop me, the writer, from feeling bad about it. I have been going through some personal stuff lately and just have not found the time ...

Alrighty then, hello there, folks. Awhile ago I decided to hop onto the zombie fic bandwagon (original, right?) and this was somewhat the result. Originally it wasn't written for KS, but after several rewrites and restructuring I decided to give it a try. Basically, instead of churning out chapter s...

Kiyomi be creepin.' I'm quite sure I have no idea what you are talking about, good sir. None at all... I still can't tell if I "like" Yuuma. Add a bit of character development in the coming chapters, and soon he'll be likeable ^_^ Damn, I sure hope so. Yuuma is a bitch to write sometimes....

Chapter Six: Interrupting Interlude “Hey, Yuuma! Got a minute?” Called it. Fucking. Called it. Didn't even make it halfway back to the dorms. If there is a God above, he sure has a sense of humor. Or nothing better to do. Not sure which prospect is more terrifying. I grunt out something akin to a r...

Do you mean "me...she gave me a look"? I'm no grammar nazi/English aficionado, but it seemed off to me when I read it the first time. Not sure what would be most grammatically correct, but the phrasing here is deliberate. But if it confuses, eh, might change it...tis a small thing. Or did...

I look around and realize we are at the front door. “Ah, um...not sure. Not much to see in the main building. Nothing you haven't seen before at any other school, anyway. The auxilary building has a pool and some other fitness facilities. Nurses' office is there too, but they probably already told y...

Chapter Five: Impertinent Permanence Holy crap. I'm speechless. Like, actually speechless. For once, it isn't my stupid brain getting the signals crossed. I simply have no idea what to say. What does someone say in a situation like this? I need to say something. She's just looking up at me...smilin...

Mirage_GSM wrote:Word of God

Much appreciated, and very welcome news. Dodged a bit of bullet. Would have hated to cover that plot hole.

Chapter Five is complete and will be posted as soon as my editor gets it back to me.

I keep seeing the class groups like this: 3-1: Hearing Impaired 3-2: Vision Impaired 3-3: Everyone 3-4: Limb issues (aren't Emi and Rin in this one?) This is more or less my reasoning as well. I view 3-3/3-4 as a sort of spill over class for those not serious enough to need to be in 3-1 or 3-2. How...

Is it? I thought that was fanon and not canon. Ya know, I searched for quite some time to find definitive answers to the structure of Yamaku. They never mention a class higher than 3-4, only homeroom teachers for 3-2 and 3-3, and only 3-2 has any real theme to it. Honestly I couldn't remember where...

Well, let's get some of the editing out of the way. There are several instances of its instead of it's. Remember one is a contraction and the other is a possessive pronoun. There where several instances of this. as opposed to city at home Do you mean "sitting"? on that its dying to share w...