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by atw_ah
Sat Jul 21, 2012 10:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43298

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Eleven 7/21/12)

Hello, everybody! I'm back from my vacation and I have a new chapter ready. It was nice to be away from everything for a while. It let me recharge and reorganize my thoughts for this story and others. Now without further ado, I give you... -------- Chapter Eleven: Out and About Oh, good God. I've fo...
by atw_ah
Wed Jul 11, 2012 12:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Familiar (HUGE WIP)
Replies: 23
Views: 8063

Re: Familiar (HUGE WIP)

Is normal to have read this whole story with a smile on my face? If it isn't, then I've seriously got a problem... Either way, Brogurt, you've caught my interest. I really enjoyed reading this. I also loved the parallels that you drew from Lily's path (the moment on the wheat field and even the sex ...
by atw_ah
Tue Jul 10, 2012 4:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43298

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Ten 7/7/12)

Compliments for days :lol: . I love the immediate gratification I get from writing each chapter. It feels good to read all the positive comments. Spotted a few mistakes in the begining. missing prepositions like 'of', that sort of thing. Damn, I try to proofread each of my chapters before I post it...
by atw_ah
Sat Jul 07, 2012 3:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43298

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Ten 7/7/12)

I almost didn't write this chapter today. I was drawn towards writing another, non-Bloodline-related, story, but more on that later. I've wanted to get this chapter out of the way for a while a now. The idea came to me randomly when I was driving to school a month ago and it's been on the back-burne...
by atw_ah
Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 56361

Re: Scene 5 - Five Years Later

While I'm at it, I still don't have an overall title for this. The scenes all have names - even those yet unwritten - but the encompassing title still escapes me. I almost don't want to put a label on it until I've actually written the whole thing - like naming it something before I finish might sp...
by atw_ah
Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43298

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Nine 6/29/12)

Worst case of foot in mouth disease I've seen in a while... Blabbering rumours about teachers having affairs with students to other teachers you have known for less than five minutes... Yeah, this part TOTALLY wasn't based on something that has happened in my life. *Innocently whistling* While I wa...
by atw_ah
Fri Jun 29, 2012 5:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43298

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Nine 6/29/12)

Well what do we have here? Another chapter you say, well why not? For some reason or another, I've been very anxious to write this chapter specifically. It's nothing really special but I felt it was different from the others. Don't know why. Enjoy! -------- Chapter Nine: Watch Your Step I would like...
by atw_ah
Mon Jun 25, 2012 9:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43298

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Eight 6/25/12)

Frankly, I was convinced the whole 'Hisao going Master of Romance on Yamaku Students' thing was just Hanamaru being slightly mental. His reaction ('Nooo, my beloved has fallen into the clutches of the Feminist conspiracy Master of Romance') was enough for me to put him on that particular list. Hm, ...
by atw_ah
Mon Jun 25, 2012 2:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43298

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Eight 6/25/12)

Wow, it's actually been a while since I've written, at least for Bloodline. This chapter took me a little longer to write because I wasn't too sure how I wanted to present this new information. It was an issue this chapter because from this point on I'm moving away from using VN based scenes. Enjoy!...
by atw_ah
Thu Jun 14, 2012 1:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Challenge Accepted (Kenji/Iwanako) Updated 4/3
Replies: 12
Views: 7371

Challenge Accepted (Kenji/Iwanako) Updated 4/3

*Sigh* This is what happens when I ask questions that shouldn't be asked and I get an answer for it.... Leaty : Try as I might, I can't bring myself to write an Iwanako/Kenji story. atw_ah : I just realized, how would a Iwanako/Kenji storyline even start without Hisao being in Yamaku in the first pl...
by atw_ah
Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 423049

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako) (u. 6/3/2012)

I would say that the original ending of chapter four was good enough as it was. It ended the chapter with a bit of comedy. But considering how you are writing your Iwanako, I think that the extension was the better solution. Your Iwanako is still in the transitional stages of being in Yamaku so endi...
by atw_ah
Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Facing my Pains
Replies: 115
Views: 36485

Re: Facing my Pains

Normally, disabilities are not predictable. One can't be sure how their body will react in certain situations. But I did say "normally". Runners, especially those involved in Track and Field, are able to keep track of how much they can run before their bodies give out on them. From persona...
by atw_ah
Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 68179

Re: Free to Soar

This fic is one of the first that I read when I joined the forum and I'm glad that it finally updated. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I also liked how the Hanako you wrote still has to deal with her social anxieties about being a relationship. What I've seen in other post-Hanako good ends is tha...
by atw_ah
Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43298

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Seven 6/9/12)

I hate being sick, it hampers my ability to write because of the headaches. Thankfully, I'm better now and with a new chapter. Enjoy -------- Chapter Seven: Lost or Found Ok, I just have to keep walking. Just keep walking, don't look back and don't look suspicious. I'm just a regular student, not th...
by atw_ah
Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43298

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Six 6/2/12)

Hi everybody! It's been a while since I've updated, you can blame that in the multiple distractions that I've had this week. Anyways, with this chapter for some reason I felt like one of those guys in the front of the old-timey trains just shoveling coal into the furnace. It might just be me who thi...