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What a nice piece. The ending makes me sad.

Hot darn. Been looking forward to this. I'm enjoying your Hanako narrator. If you stutter someone's name, should you capitalize the first letter of the stutters? I'm not sure myself, so I'm happy to be informed on the matter, but somehow it seems weird reading "L-lilly" and "H-hisao&q...

Loving this build-up. It's gonna hurt so much when...

Your Meiko is most enjoyable, too. I'm always interested in writer's portrayals of her.

While you take a well-earned break, may I ask for a complete list of character arcs?

So far we've had Shizune and Lilly. Hanako and Emi are still to come. Apparently you have a Misha one saved for last? Looking forward to that. Does Rin have an arc? I'm quite curious about her dissapearance.

Most enjoyable chapters.

Hideaki and Hanako? Did not see that one coming. Kinda cute! Wait...make that...very cute ^_^!

Hi Everyone, Something very significant happened to me last night. I’ve known about this thread for a while, but have never had anything to say or talk about before. Mid last year I discovered KS, and a few months after that I started reading fanfiction. The stories were nice, I enjoyed them - even ...

brythain wrote:It ain't over yet…

Yep, I understand we've got a whole host of characters and their respective vignettes to come!

If they're as good as these ones, we're in for a treat (I even enjoyed the Jigoro bit, and I never enjoy scenes with him in them), but I hope they're not all sad ^_^.

It seems my reward for complimenting you is to be run over with the 18 wheels of feels in the very next chapter. Somehow, I feel a distinctly conflicted sense of both justice and injustice.

Your writing is very good, I feel. The story is interesting so far, too.

I kind of agree with Helbereth, though. It's so good that I find it hard to grasp the context. You've mentioned this is due to Shizune's PoV and the fragmented/mosaic style of the story, so I'll keep reading.

On the contents page for the Suzu route, below the chapters you'll see several one-off stories in the theme of the pseudo-route, but not directly part of the route's timeline. Perhaps write a couple of these for your route idea? You'll get to try out your skills by publishing smaller stories for us ...

Yes! Yes! Yes! I always thought she looked cuteinteresting in the 3-3 dev photo! Finally someone is writing a story about her! Can't wait, can't wait!

I had the same reservations others mentioned at first, but your positive attitude is winning me over! The second chapter is a noticeable improvement on the previous one, but there are still some issues with 'I' or the beginning of sentences not being capitalised. In general, I think you'll be fine, ...

Dang, I didn't realize I'd actually stepped over the line with Chapter 4! Mirage warned me about it, but as usual I didn't listen, and he turned out to be correct again. I thought women just played hard-to-get with that "No, please don't!" routine. Alright, I guess 'no' means 'no'. A valua...

Chapter 11 – PoV: Lilly I'm on my way to the Shanghai. How appropriate. Even more appropriate since it was Emi Ibarazaki who asked me to come here, considering last time. If what happened then occurs again, she - and possibly I - are going to be on the receiving end of whatever the coffee shop equi...

Chapter 10 – PoV: Hisao A weekend of avoiding the roof, the nurse and the track. A weekend of wondering if the woman I think I love thinks she loves me. I almost don't want her to come back for fear that she says 'no'. I called Lilly this morning. Pointless. She was still on the train. It was nice ...