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- Wed Jan 01, 2014 4:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 35177
Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Huh, why didn't I read this before? Well, you have yourself a new reader anyway.
- Mon Dec 30, 2013 7:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 94131
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update 16/12/2013]
Huh. For some reason when this started I just couldn't get into it, but a couple days ago I had nothing better to do and tried again. I must say I'm glad I did, whatever turned me off in the beginning is certainly gone now.
- Wed Dec 25, 2013 7:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
- Replies: 217
- Views: 128472
Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route
Oh wow. This is... quite good, to say the least. Love how you blend humor in with out it being overbearing. Took me a minute to get the reference with Suzu's wake-up scene in the lunchroom, here's hoping our protagonists here can help her through that, if it is the same issue. Uhm... not sure where ...
- Mon Nov 04, 2013 7:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 736631
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 23 up 11/3]
So.... What was Yuuko doing?
- Sat Oct 26, 2013 5:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
- Replies: 51
- Views: 21266
Re: A Molly route. Update 26/10/13
Sorry, gotta agree there, the "like pancakes" bit is completely out of tone for the scene, and just kind of jolts you out of the story.
- Tue Oct 22, 2013 6:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
- Replies: 51
- Views: 21266
Re: A Molly route.
Pretty much what others have said, that it moves a bit fast and could use some expansion. Otherwise it looks pretty good. And a Molly route is something I've been waiting for actually. Oh, one other thing. I release the death grip on my chest as the pain slowly surpasses , Should just be 'passes', I...
- Sat Sep 07, 2013 12:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 94131
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [First Chapter 07/09/2013]
Pretty good. But it seems a bit... rushed I guess? I can't really point it out. Maybe I'm just used to drawn-out descriptions everywhere...
- Wed Sep 04, 2013 7:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 736631
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 12 up 9/4]
I feel bad for Hisao. Whichever way this goes, someone he cares about is going to be hurt. Well... there is one solution... but I rather doubt it will go that way. If you're thinking what I think you're thinking then I hope it doesn't go that way. One of the things that makes this fic so good is th...
- Wed Sep 04, 2013 6:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 736631
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 12 up 9/4]
I feel bad for Hisao. Whichever way this goes, someone he cares about is going to be hurt. Well... there is one solution... but I rather doubt it will go that way.
- Sun Sep 01, 2013 5:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
- Replies: 86
- Views: 32612
Re: Once More [Update: 8/29]
Why haven't I read this yet? Well anyway, you have a new reader.
- Tue Aug 27, 2013 12:37 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Of Secrets and Scandals (an OC pseudo-pseudo-route)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6849
Re: Of Secrets and Scandals (an OC psuedo-psuedo-route)
Hm. Not bad, another one to keep my eye on.
- Mon Aug 26, 2013 1:09 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Broken String Symphony
- Replies: 14
- Views: 7342
Re: Broken String Symphony
Sooo... I take it the bullet was more dangerous to take out than risk problems later...?
Of course, the real reason is for dramatic plot happenings later
Of course, the real reason is for dramatic plot happenings later
- Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Broken String Symphony
- Replies: 14
- Views: 7342
Re: Broken String Symphony
Hm... well, it's worth keeping an eye on at least. Quite a different backstory than most. Just, as always, keep an eye out for sueishness.
- Mon Aug 19, 2013 7:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Waiting (Chapter Ten, 7/15)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 33727
Re: Waiting (Chapter Three, 8/16)
Well, since you haven't had many comments, and I don't want you to get discouraged... erm... [insert encouraging message here}.
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- Sun Aug 18, 2013 10:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
- Replies: 32
- Views: 11742
Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC)
Odd. I remember being taught in school that "___ and I" was proper, and "___ and me" was poor grammar."Rika and me." The same happens again in the last line of the chapter.