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Act 2 Scene 5: These Girls In which Hisao has trouble with the girls around him. I place my books in my schoolbag as the school comes to an end. Most of the other students have already left as soon as the bell rang. Few of them are hanging around chatting with one another; Misha and Shizune being a...

Act 2, Scene 4: Bits and Pieces “So what time does the movie start?” Takashi kneels down to tie his shoe. “At 19:00,” Asuka replies. “We have about two hours to kill.” “We can walk around the shopping district,” Ikuno suggests. “Oh that reminds me, I want to see if there are any summer dresses on s...

Goodbye I take my usual seat next to the window. I’ve been visiting every day since the incident. Today is no different; though this time it’s going to be different. We haven’t spoken in a while. Whether because he or I didn’t know what to say. But even then, the conversations weren’t anything spec...

The weekend before the track meet would have been the festival... Time must half slip my mind, luckily changing last weekend to last time can fix that confusion. :lol: “I must have forgotten.” Probably "He must have forgotten." That one was intentional. Also you forgot the 100m race I omi...

Act 2, Scene 3: Runners High As Hisao cheers on Emi, he sees a new side of her. I grab my breakfast before I make my way out of the cafeteria. Breakfast is usually the same: a bowl of rice, canned coffee, and a fruit. Today’s fruit is an apple. I walk halfway through the cafeteria before I hear som...

I guess it's easy to her to do hadoukens, but I wonder how does she do shoryukens ._.

She can settle for the Mexican uppercut.

Nice to see Molly get some attention again. It's nice to go pick this up again. This has been in the back of my mind for a minute. Though I think this was more about Takashi than Molly this time. :lol: But she'll be more prominent next time around. Two or three typos or missing words like here: As ...

Act 2, Scene 2: Inner Shade Little details can mean more than they seem. “That will be 1750 yen sir,” the cashier rings up the total. I pull out two folded up 1000 yen notes from my dark brown wallet. I straighten them out and hand them to the old man behind the counter, “Here you go.” The cashier ...

My headcanon is that Molly's name is really 'Moriko', the name her Japanese mother gave her. :) I don't think you wrote much of Molly/Moriko besides 2 one shots IIRC. Though I could be wrong since I haven't read your After The Dream piece :oops: worried that you'd positively hate her depiction here...

That was a neat chapter, worth the wait. Really like the the fortune telling scene and the reveal on who it was. It makes more sense considering Molly's name being pronounce the same in Japanese. :lol: Molly would have gotten away with it if it wasn't for the meddling Student Council President and h...

The stillness of the pod makes it seems as time has stop "seem as if time has stopped" Almost no typo that I noticed, though. All of those are stuff you can easily find yourself if you read your writing out loud to yourself. I spotted a typo, it's suppose to be pond. :lol: I have that hab...

Act 2: Body Scene 1:Daily Routine *beep* *beep* *beep* I wake to the sound of my alarm clock. I welcome the sound with the bang of my fist. Lifting my head from under the pillow, I am greeting by the light invading my eyes and I rub them to get adjusted. I look at the clock to check the time, 6 o’c...

Loving this fic quite a bit. Sad what Emi did to Rin, but this Rin I like as well. Really reminds me of a movie thriller, si that's awesome. Misha's the killer, Misha's next, or she's tooling up for a manhunt. Only one of these scenarios would be not-okay. :lol: I'm thinking she or Hanako is the nex...

Random idea of a story popped in my mind while listening to some music. Though the original plot was different, though the idea was the same, with another idea happening when writing it. Hoping it turned out okay. Feedback and criticism are welcome. Thanks. Eyes Without a Face The last lock makes th...

I'm liking this so far. I get a thriller-noir vibe when I read the three chapters, and I don't know if that was your intent, but I can dig this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.