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- Tue Feb 23, 2016 10:11 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
- Replies: 4862
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Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Hi there.. I'm new on here.. i've just discovered this board and this topic just.. I want to tell you a story. I'm a 21 year old male. Decently attractive i suppose, never had a girlfriend, never came close to having one either. That's not why im writing this. At 20 I moved away from my parents hou...
- Mon Feb 22, 2016 1:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20868
Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 4 Added 2-21-2
leaving Hanako and I behind in the store. ... and if she is jealous of Hanako and I ... and how she feels about Hanako and I. Hanako and me - in all three cases How do I get someone who doesn't want to see me to talk to me? It's not that she doesn't want to see him... And really... Miki? That rumou...
- Sun Feb 21, 2016 5:42 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Birthday!
- Replies: 927
- Views: 391780
Re: Birthday!
Miki, Happy Birthday. Lils, as well though pretty belated.
- Sun Feb 21, 2016 5:38 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Went back and got that good Rin ending.
- Replies: 9
- Views: 8213
Re: Went back and got that good Rin ending.
My reading of the good Rin ending is that Hisao had given up on the relationship by the time of the final scene, and *Rin* rescues the relationship in the end. For me, it feels like they each rescue it for the other, without even knowing that they've done so. Extraordinarily appropriate. This is ho...
- Sun Feb 21, 2016 1:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20868
Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 4)
*THUD* My fist violently silences the blaring in my ears that is my alarm clock. The damned thing brings an all too early end to a night of fitful sleep. It seems that darkness is not my friend as of late. Even when tired I have trouble actually sleeping. I doubt my pills were all there was to blame...
- Sat Feb 13, 2016 10:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20868
Chapter 3
*sigh* I wipe my forehead and the back of my hand glistens with the moisture of my sweat. A supremely hot day. I'm not the only one though. Everyone seems to share in my discomfort as I gaze around the room. Once again, Misha is holding her shirt open and using her notebook to fan herself down. I wo...
- Wed Feb 10, 2016 9:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20868
Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 2 Added 2-9-20
Hey, hey now. Play nice.
- Wed Feb 10, 2016 1:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20868
Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 2 Added 2-9-20
If you or other people can provide constructive criticism and tips without coming across as condescending (your not, at least not yet) I would appreciate it. I truly do not intend to condescend. I think I have a few problems with reading your material. Here are the two main ones: 1) You don't use c...
- Wed Feb 10, 2016 11:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20868
Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 2 Added 2-9-20
I would appreciate some pointers then. I thought it was fine (my story o surprise. I know how its supposed to go.) Ive always had trouble getting things out in a way that really makes sense to other people. The first chapter i wrote then reviewed myself. The second I wrote, reviewed, then had one of...
- Wed Feb 10, 2016 9:19 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20868
Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 2 Added 2-9-20
Well, thinking about protection the first time won't do them much good, if they already forget about it the second time... Also... A H-scene already? Really? Mirage, please, please do your usual editing job. It's painful to read. :) I thought I might get some comments like this, lol. Oh well. Im no...
- Tue Feb 09, 2016 11:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20868
Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 2)
The day that Lilly returns from Scotland comes. Hanako and I meet up after class lets out for the day. Walking hand in hand, we make our way to our dorm rooms to change. I go first, her following behind into my room. I just change my shirt and put on my sweater vest, deciding to keep it simple. Not ...
- Mon Feb 08, 2016 1:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 20868
Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
“Hisao…. I want to give you…. this one gift. Please accept my gift to you….” Hanako places her hands on my shoulders and leans in, giving me a kiss on the lips as we stand on the sidewalk. I stand there for a moment, a bit dazed with how forward she has become. “H-Hanako…” I stutter in a daze as I l...
- Fri Feb 05, 2016 2:06 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
- Replies: 4862
- Views: 1500628
Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Hey Folks, im sorry if its a bad timing or just absolutely blows up the current topic.. I've posted here before, that was 1 1/2 years ago and I can truly say that the people on here are wonderful. Never have i felt so accepted before, thats why im confident enough to tell you a new story. A little ...
- Thu Jan 28, 2016 5:47 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
- Replies: 2412
- Views: 887270
Re: You have been playing too much KS when...
When you have a roleplaying plot that uses KS as its base.
- Sun Nov 08, 2015 7:17 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: KS lookalikes
- Replies: 762
- Views: 343001
Re: KS lookalikes
I have no doubt that these have been brought before, but I was watching Hidamari Sketch and noticed these two came up ^_^ https://i.gyazo.com/8c6c71c2b21c309f4a469802c3704945.png I can definitely see Sae as Shizune physically. However she doesnt have the matching competitive attitude. From Rakudai ...