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Not much to say about this chapter. It’s more a gathering of forces than anything truly interesting going on, though Lynda’s synopsis of meeting Misha was well done. they idled away the time until the sister’s arrival on their cell phones. How many sisters are arriving? Akira grinned and pat Hideaki...

(I haven't read Developments , but largely because I thought it was a Lily-fic, a character I really can't stand) Yeah, one of the dangers of setting it in that continuity is that some people write it off as something it's not. I have learned to live with that. To paraphrase something you said in a...

I’d recommend putting your new chapter 2 here, at the end of the thread, rather than where your now redacted chapter 2 was. Anyone new to the thread will see all these weird comments about a perfectly good chapter.

Just make a comment in the original chapter 2 post about it being replaced.

That's why I don't post here all too often, really. It feels wrong getting people's hopes up by putting my name in the most recent poster box, and then they come in and just find a few scattered thoughts or responses to the few comments people still leave behind. But you posting here does have the ...

dewelar wrote:So...yeah, we'll call it a mixed bag. However, having read many more stories, I now must admit that this is the best Emi-centric story I've read, and that's still a little sad.

Someday, I really need to get off my metaphorical ass and write the Emi epilogue I long to read.

LilyKitsune wrote:On a more fun note, since its removal, people will be filled with terrible amounts of curiosity given the reactions to that chapter.

You got that right!

However, I think you're self-conscious enough as an author to know this, and have already worked out a far more interesting and in-character way for things to, *ahem*, develop from here. It's because of this that I'm looking forward to the next few chapters instead of dreading them. Excellent work ...

Dumb question: Have you gotten past the opening scenes to where you meet Mutou for the first time? Because I think that’s the first time a sprite is used in the game. There aren’t any in the prologue.

Chapter 26:

dewelar wrote:It took spending most of the past two days doing nothing but laying in bed, eating, and listening to my mom, but it paid off.

Now Emi is the chicken!

You’re probably right about catching up. I’m in Chapter 32 now.

That's both good and bad.

For me, it's mostly bad. I never finished going through 1.1 and compiling the errors I saw, and now I have to start over.

Oh well. Just an excuse to start all over again.

It's distributed computing, like SETI@home. You download the program from Stanford’s site and it uses otherwise unused computer capacity to fold protein for research.

In Chapter 23:

dewelar wrote:Hisao is laying on the bed, his eyes closed.

dewelar wrote:Who knows how long I might have been laying there if you weren't?

dewelar wrote:Hisao is still laying on the bed, his eyes closed.

Unless Hisao is a chicken, all of these should use ‘lying’.

Hey, I'm catching up in my re-read; just starting Chapter 26.

Hm? I think they are referring to you putting up something like 50K PPD; double my output. Oh, that. Give the average some time to level out :D I’m referring to the fact that Talifan, after being absent so long, started folding for KS again, which means I picked up another ‘threat’ on my user page ...

Bwahahaha! I'm back! Just like herpes.... err no I didn't mean that.... but, anyway I'm back in my rightful number 1 spot on the KS F@H team. Who will be the next challenger to attempt to usurp my throne! Who shall it be! Come on! I and my spinach powered computer (named Popeye of course) dare the ...

Oh, sure, Mirage can grab the low-hanging fruit, while I have to actually work to find errors.

Hoitash wrote:While Misha gently brought her done from her orgasm,