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Lurked for a bit when you first posted the fic. I like where it's going! Alas, I never really have any constructive criticism (true for all fics I read here)- I read for entertainment and small errors dont bug me 'cuz I correct them myself while reading. If I'm entertained and like where the fic is,...

Saw the email for the update on this a bit ago and I'm glad you decided to continue this fic! I had to reread it (not a complaint :) ) since I hadn't really read it since before I created my account, but it was worth it! I always liked this fic, was like the second or third one I began reading when ...

Another well written and entertaining chapter! The POV snaking things around really does keep the future in a shroud of mystery- a good thing for this fic. Keep up the great work, dude

Well then. This should be interesting

Noticed the few changes (stylistic mostly, as you said), but still conveying the same points and things. Looking forward to the continuation of this fic!

I've grown really tired of stories which have a predictable end That's what's nice about this fic. You just cant tell where it's going to go. The only thing that we do know is that there will be a fork of sorts in the road soon, but not too soon. Everything in between is still up in the air, making...

Loved the dialogue here (always been a fan of back and forth sarcasm). One thing I noticed- "She does. First time she saw me...gave me a look." Do you mean "me... she gave me a look"? I'm no grammar nazi/English aficionado, but it seemed off to me when I read it the first time. A...

The first chapter was a new and interesting take on how Hisao gains some insight into the problem and left the rest to the imagination. That was good. I'm pretty certain that further chapters won't make the story as a whole any better. Very true. However, the second part here looks like there will ...

This couldnt have been more ironically timed (I'm an HvZ player at my university and we had a minigame today on one of the quads). This will definitely be interesting and worth following.

Maradar wrote:I don't know whether to be happy because it's a good finish, or sad because it's over.. Anyways well written

Agreed. Had a blast reading, Hoitash. Onto your next work! We'll all be waiting!! (No pressure )

Sooo... I take it the bullet was more dangerous to take out than risk problems later...? Yeah, imagine having to explain why a patient is paralyzed because you accidentally nicked their spine. Probably in court lol Of course, the real reason is for dramatic plot happenings later ;) That could be an...

Interest = piqued. Going to keep an eye on this one

I am using the format, for the most part, sometimes however they don't fall under the category of "Epilogue, Route, Prequel". I was under the impression all fanfics were worth mentioning, so I've been indiscriminately tagging everything. Using the format is nice, but listing every fic can...

I liked Weekend, so this'll be good

Guestimate wrote:Well, since you haven't had many comments, and I don't want you to get discouraged... erm... [insert encouraging message here}.

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Just because nobody is saying anything doesnt mean that nobody is reading (awkward phrasing is awkward). I've been quietly keeping an eye on and enjoying this fic