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I felt my hopes getting up near the end, until that last line.You glorious bastard, you.

This was great, I love short little stories like this.

lolawesome wrote: I don't know why, but I love writing Kenji

Same here, his type of insanity is very fun to read and write.

I loved this chapter so much! You, sir, are a fantastic writer.

I think in an earlier chapter you said he would run only short distances now because of his injury. Why would that even be an issue if he only ever ran the 100m anyway? Somehow the second half of this chapter felt like someone had pushed the fast forward button. There are a few other things that pu...

I'm going to assume the doctor being named Allen is a vague reference to one of your other stories (I think it was yours) where Hisao says that Nurse seems like an 'Allen' to him. Or am I wrong on that? We warned you about it, Hisao. You should have listened to us and stayed away, Hisao. None of us ...

Okay. Chapter 2 has been edited. I thank you all for your support. Chapter 3 is ... kinda coming along. Still working on it. The good news is the chapter after that is almost finished so when I do update there won't be a huge gap between the updates. I thought there were only three parts, but I'm n...

since it's already mentioned, yes Kenji was all in Hisao's mind I actually guessed that as well once I finished the story, and I was right? Well, that's a new one. But can you guess the REAL twist? Yamaku is actually a secret government program created to study the affects on human psyche by genera...

Wait, Kenji, not spouting nonsense about a Feminist Agenda and generally being crazy? What have you done to Kenji! (On another note, this certainly looks promising.)

I have one small complaint, you use "said" quite often, replacing it with "replied", "exclaimed", "questioned", "proclaimed", etc... will help mix up the variety a little bit. Also, when you put things like "Suzu said" (For example) in the ...

This looks somewhat promising, although having two disabled people as detectives has its drawbacks, especially since one is nearly blind even with glasses and the other could die at any moment. But I can forfeit realism for entertainment.

This chapter was amazing, I enjoyed it so much with the awkwardness and Mutou scene. My favourite one yet.

Beautiful... Not enough to make me cry, but definitely enough for the feels.

The programers of DE probably had their reasons for introducing the drug - maybe as a plot element, maybe as a means of limiting the amounts of upgrades a player can get (Shadowrun uses a mechanic for this purpse), maybe both. Here's a spoiler warning for those who want to play Human Revolution. It...

I haven't seen it yet, although now it is on my radar and I'll probably give it a shot some other time. Personally I wouldn't watch a walk through of it until you finish the game, which I have. But then again the whole I found KS was from ChilledChaos's play through. (But I did play and 100% the gam...

That was great. I had the biggest smile on my face when I saw that fan fiction of a fan fiction post. Hilarious.