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I'm enjoying this fic so far. Hanako and Rin isn't a combination you see often. It'll be interesting to see where this goes. As for criticism, I think the name above each paragraph is unnecessary. It's immersion breaking and isn't needed unless you have a change in perspective, which you haven't had...

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Now that is an obscure reference. That said, it feels a bit out of place in a KS story. Makes sense given the origin of the character though I guess.

I enjoyed this story, as expected for Oddball's work. You always do a great job at creating interesting OCs who don't seem out of place in the setting.

I really enjoyed this chapter. Hisao meeting his old friends again and also running into Iwanako is something a lot of authors have done, and I never really get tired of reading it. It's always interesting to see how different authors handle it.

I think this must be one of the fastest completed pseudo-routes on this forum. Nice work! I really enjoyed this fanfic and I look forward to whatever you write next (if you write anything next. We can't exactly force you ).

That sucks. Hopefully things get less hectic soon. I've heard crunch time can be pretty awful and it kind of makes me glad I ended up dropping my games programming course at uni.

Anyway, I'm loving the route so far, and I look forward to the next instalment, whenever things get less busy for you.

Another great chapter. There's only a couple of minor issues, like near the start when you misspelled tanabata as "tarabata". Also, I've also noticed that you tend to leave out some question marks, specifically when the speech is followed with "asked Rika", "they asked"...

Another fantastic instalment as always. I've not commented on this before, but I've been following it for a while and It's easily one of my favourite fics on this site.

It will be part of the plot later on. But it's color. She was watching him take them, so could see the color of the pills. Okay, my misunderstanding then. When I read "higher dosage" I thought Hisao is supposed to take three of pill X a day while Rika only takes two. It makes sense if the...

I've been browsing this forum for a little while now but never really commented on anything. Figured I might as well start here.
I really enjoyed what I've read so far. This fic definitely shows promise and I look forward to reading more in future. I'm always a fan of more light-hearted Rika stuff.