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Wow... your art is really stellar.

Excellent work.

I like to imagine Rin wandering around a store with Emi and arbitrarily buying a lot of random clothes that don't match. Like she would dress like an absolute clown if there wasn't somebody there to veto her bad decisions. Like... I can see her buying light-up tennis shoes. Doesn't Rin prefer sanda...

The meta gag with Hanako here was funny but felt a little bit on the nose with the way she phrased it- "Oh." She ponders that for a moment. "I don't know… I- I don't watch people that much." Then again, I get the feeling that you may have had her say that to show how her persona...

I like to imagine Rin wandering around a store with Emi and arbitrarily buying a lot of random clothes that don't match. Like she would dress like an absolute clown if there wasn't somebody there to veto her bad decisions. Like... I can see her buying light-up tennis shoes. I can see that. I'm not ...

I like to imagine Rin wandering around a store with Emi and arbitrarily buying a lot of random clothes that don't match. Like she would dress like an absolute clown if there wasn't somebody there to veto her bad decisions.

Like... I can see her buying light-up tennis shoes.

The cafeteria is nearly dead at seven in the morning. With nobody else to talk to or even overhear, I resign myself to standing off to the side and watching sugar dissolve into a cup of coffee. It's lukewarm and not very strong, as coffee from the cafeteria is, but I figure it's better than nothing....

Yeah, I guess it happened from me having Rin-route-Hisao levels of denseness and also karma for not paying attention in class. Well to be fair, it's not like KS is a super sexual or adult game outside of those specific scenes. If you don't know about them beforehand it's easy to see why they would ...

Hey, I can't speak for anyone else but I imagine that most people would really prefer not to download anything. Why don't you just post here on the forum?

Wow, a new post after four years? Welcome back then!

Anyway, this one-shot felt a little abrupt to me- maybe it just seems strange that the two of them would recognize each other so quickly and easily. But it was a very sweet premise and a unique concept. Good work!

Well, this might be the best thing ever created by a human.

That really depends on the route. In Emi's route there is quite a lot of snark in Hisao; in other routes not so much. So I don't really have a problem with this version of Hisao - except for those already stated in my previous comments. I agree that there's a level of flexibility in Hisao's persona...

Well that would explain Misha's weird aversion to stairs... Yes, about that, it's really suspicious that Misha only complains about stairs at a single point in the story when she conveniently get's out of doing work because of it. She happily climbs the stairs to their classroom (which is on the th...

Mirage_GSM wrote:Does Misha have inner ear problems in your story? Don't remember anything about that...

Hoitash wrote:Yeah, a doctor diagnosed it waaaaaaay back in USM proper. It's pretty minor, so she just needs to do basic hearing safety stuff.

Well that would explain Misha's weird aversion to stairs...

Alright Coze, I got to reading this and unsurprisingly, you are very funny. The sense of humor about it makes this fic charming to read. I have to say though that there is so much snark in the narration that it really doesn't feel like Hisao to me. It's hard to get comfortable with, like a lot of ti...

Mirage_GSM wrote:So... Is this Rin narrating and she refers to herself in the third person, or do we have a narrator who is somehow just as spacey as Rin is?

I see it as limited 3rd person, like not that the narrator is spacey but that they are describing things as Rin sees and thinks about them.