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End is way too abrupt.

SemisoftCheese wrote:Some dumb act/chapters about Hisao finding his way, a brief fling with the character of your choosing (how scandy), and a year passes.

Now that's a cop-out.

Now I wonder if it is better to have ending like that or unfinished fanfic...

I would assume Misha knows differences between sign languages very well and is at least communicable in ASL.

It is rare to see first installment this good, indeed. Hopefully continuation will be as good.

I... I think that whole shed business is a little overplayed here.

Riakai wrote:After that hilarious ordeal, everyone

Everyone what?

Troy wrote:Erm i think you reposted act 2 scene 7 instead of what you intented to post. I dont completly understand

Obvious mistake is obvious.

Emi deserved it. She should be happy they did not expelled her on spot (for sure Nurse doing - he did everything he could to prevent that). Mentioning drunk driver would be a little too much, if Iwanako knew about it, but well. Accidental obliteration is accidental. Presence of Hanako and Lilly IS s...

Yay, finally new installment.

forgetmenot wrote:There'll probably be another late in act 4 with a white unicorn or something.

Considering what is said about unicorns and virings... um, yeah...

That Karen barely glimpsed so far does not bother me. Pretty obvious foreshadowing is pretty obvious. Fact that whole setup is predictable is okay... but neglecting pills just because he could not bother with gulping them is rather OOC for me. Ah well, let's see how it will unfold before judging.

Pure fluff with sprinkle of comedy and erotica, huh.

Not that there is anything wrong with these, noo...

I went ahead and asked about this discrepancy over Miyagi and the male English teacher in the "Ask!" thread. This was the response: The gender reference in "Little Wing" is was wrong. :( Fixed for future releases. :) So, Miyagi is the English teacher for all third year classes. ...

Yes, Miyagi is female (per "Promise of Time"), but that means she can't be the English teacher, because (per "Little Wing") the English teacher is male - although I suppose that's why the suspension was written into the story, the timing seems...off. I don't think it was ever sp...

Pretty funny, I must say. On one hand, thirty-something fustrated miss without husband and with cynical streak. On other hand, thirty-something bachelor, oxymoronically detached from reality as much as possible, yet being in sciences teaching about nature of universe. Yay?

Yep, yay.

Er, Prima Aprilis was a while ago...

Now that was oniric trip. Very nice read. And I think it's not quite right even for a dream: There's just too much detail - everything's too crisp for me to accept it as a dream... I don't think it was too long or too detailed - obviously it is not normal dream. Why you have problem with that, but n...