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Hope your doing better mate, thought I let you know that I posted a link to your fic on Sufficient Velocity. Just something to cheer you up if you are still in the hospital.

Very nice pictures, capture the scenes they protray spot on and exactly how i pictured them in my head. Have you inserted them into the chapters in which the scenes take place yet? Or is that on a list of things to do? Hope the one shot and start of chapter three are coming along ok and things are w...

The spin off of School Days, Shiny Days (which is a update remake of Summer Days with a new route to boot) came out last year by JASTUSA. Though a shitstorm was kicked up after they announced they were censoring few of the H-scenes due to underage rape taking place in them. Since they were worried a...

Nice to hear that the next chapter and the one shot are coming along. Looking forward to reading both when they come out, and seeing what lies within them.

I'm not sure how you could write Nomiya without him being a little bit obnoxious, since he's pretty much the same with everyone who interacts with him in Rin's route. Apart from Sae where he is somewhat softer towards due to her seemly to know how to keep him in check to a certain degree. Overall I ...

Whoops, fixed it now .

I'm working on a Saki oneshot right now, not sure if it will be part of this story's continuity but it came about after a discussion in the headcanon thread. I have to take a break from this one before diving into Act 3. That sounds like a great idea overall, especially if it will allow us to get i...

I agree, I have come to see Nomiya in the same way as you Euro on repeat playthrough's as I mentioned on the previous page when you mentioned your worries on getting his personality down. The man does mean well in his own way, he just has what many readers feel is not the best way of going about wit...

Oh yes forgot to say before, nice picture. Like how it shows Saki and Hisao leaning in just before the kiss, it also emphasises how Saki is in the position of being in control and the one who makes the move, and Hisao is in the position who reacts to it. Foreshowing how it's been Saki throughout Act...

Okay time for my chapter commentary. First congrats for finishing Act Two, after two years and many setbacks and bad luck on a few occasions, you have made it to this point. I'm sure you will reach the end of Act 3 by this time next year if things go your way. Now onto the chapter, first up Nomiya. ...

Hope your illness eases up soon, never nice to be suffering from pneumonia for weeks on end and every year as well.

The reason why I bring this up, tying the side discussion of The Royal Trap and our discussion of Hisao's shortcomings together, is that I consider two OELVNs in particular to have adopted KS ' formula and ironed out the kinks inherent to stock VN protagonists— The Royal Trap and Date Warp , both g...

Did think that reference of rockman was related to Mega man but wasn't sure til you confirmed it I forgot to bring it up in my usual commentary.

Either way it's brilliantly hilariously in character for Miki to go round at Halloween with the type of arm Mega Man has .

Welcome to the forum Metalwood,

Hope that you enjoy being on the site and the other fic's that are on it.

Blackmambauk

I tried to use this chapter to show that he was actively trying to move away from being so dense, Overall I felt you succeeded in doing that, Hisao really was a lot more aware that he felt something for Saki, something more than friendship and you are right that he is debating about whether he is r...