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Well... Two things that make me a little cautious about this story: 1. Replacing Hisao with an OC is not really a novel idea, but it can be done well - however it seems to be seductive to copy scenes from the original VN very closely, and I've seen you've taken some of the lines of the doctor almos...

I'm currently working on a re-write of Phantom Pains. It'll be out at some point, but I want to make sure I know where I'm going before I post anything! Please be aware that this fanfic will include some swearing. -- Prologue: White (This Post) Part 1: Class Rep Part 2: Lunch with Satou Part 3: 6/1...

That was fantastic!

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Thanks very much!

I'm loving this fic so far, keep it up!

On a slightly unrelated note, is there any way I can "Subscribe" to this thread and know when there are updates? I'm relatively new to this forum

Part 2! “Deep breaths. I’ve been through worse” I sit in my temporary sanctuary attempting to hype myself up for the first real public appearance i’ve agreed too “Miss Ikezawa? We’re going to be ready soon” “Thank you…” I stand and dust myself off. A quick peek in the mirror shows that most of the b...

Is Mrs not the right word? I was under the impression that Mrs was the right way to say that they're not married, correct? Mrs. is used by married women. Miss. is used by unmarried women. Ms. can be used by either and is also used to refer to women whose marital status is unknown to the writer (or ...

Welcome to the forum! :D Gotta say, this had such a nice feeling while I was reading it. I just felt so relaxed :) You opened well, the way this is set up you've got tons of room to expand story wise. I can honestly just see all the possible possibilities! Otherwise, there was a few instances where...

Okay, first of all, I'd prefer it if you posted the story here, but since it was just a short piece so far I read it anyway. A few issues: - Your dialoge is very monotone. Every single line begins with the direct speech followed by some short explanation. It's especially obvious since you coloured ...

"Future" takes places in Lillies path, Years after Hisao has attended college, and now He, Lilly and Misha all teach at Yamaku

I hope you enjoy it, and i'd love to hear some feedback!



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