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Chapter 24: Blunder Misha twirled a drill absentmindedly as Mutou droned on. Mutou was never that enthusiastic in class to begin with; today he looked like an absolute zombie. No one goofed off or tried to talk like they normally might, yet no one seemed to really be taking notes, either. The dark ...

For me, I have a really hard time seeing how you are going to cross these two series over, play it totally straight and serious, and make it work. If I were to attempt such a crossover I would make it goofy, memey, tongue-in-cheek, and overall more of a comedy than a straight drama--because there is...

I think it depends on the person, and you can't necessarily generalize to a whole population. I've known 18 year olds who are more mature talking about sex than some 30 year olds. Within KS itself, for example, you have characters who are almost totally comfortable with their situations, such as Rin...

She put an arm around Hanako’s shoulder to steady her and motioned quickly for Lilly to come in, which she did. Good for her. Usually motioning for Lilly to do something is not really effective. :roll: Nice catch. If only you guys knew how many times I've written something like that and managed to ...

Thanks for the kind words! Yeah, with the particular route I had Hisao go down, he was one choice away from having a shot at Rin. He'll have to romance her in another fic--I planned his fate very early on. --- Chapter 22: Morning Misha woke up worrying for a second that it was just a dream. Nope… Ha...

Tfw Hanako Fancopter writes 3 times the amount of chapters in your fic in 1/8th of the time LOL. I just hope the quality doesn't suffer for the quantity! Tfw Hanako Fancopter writes 3 times the amount of chapters in your fic in 1/8th of the time It is quite impressive, especially given the quality ...

Called it :-) Yep! I went back and meticulously re-played Act 1 as I was writing these chapters to make sure I set it up right. Who is this girl, and what has she done to Hanako? (I could have made that comment at several points...) As I said in an earlier post, I'm purposely writing Hanako as less...

Hmm... We have now two stories about Hanako running at the same time, and in both Hanako seems to be missing her most defining character trait completely...

What trait is that? Hyper skittish-ness?

Chapter 19: Plunge Hanako woke up later than she’d meant to. The sounds of the festival were already going strong outside. She didn’t plan to spend all day out there… too hot, too many people. Maybe she’d just hang out in her room and do a little reading first, then check out the festival. A sharp,...

I like this! You have quite a lot of grammar errors but it looks like you already have someone volunteering to help with that, if need be. The content is good though. I think everyone wishes Hanako's route were longer, so a continuation is good to see.

these are amazing and you deserve a cookie (::)

Fire and Ashes/After The Smoke Clears: D'awww. Just someone describing the incident hits me in the feels. I agree that it didn't have a big emotional punch, in the sense that it didn't really go into a lot of detail describing how devastated Hanako is on the inside, but it was serviceable. Similar f...

“I-It’s okay, Emi. Just r-remember to use the track shed. She never ch-checks there,” Hanako said. Shouldn't that be Misha's line? It could've been Misha's line as well, yes. In an earlier chapter I characterized Lilly as a bit of a gossip-monger who likes to collect tidbits like these--she'd also ...

What can I say, I'm a huge sucker for Hanako ^.^ I'm just glad you like the characterizations (other than memer Miki <.>). I did try to make sure that all of these social situations in Act 2 are ones that pretty much happen to Hanako, as opposed to being instigated by her, with the exception of the ...

Alright, I made some edits to that part of the last chapter, in hopes to help it flow a little better. The gist of the scene remains the same though. I could probably take that sequence out entirely and lose nothing of value, but I'm keeping it in just cause I think it's funny, even if no one else d...