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by Sharp-O
Thu Nov 02, 2023 8:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Getting Good [21/4/24]
Replies: 37
Views: 35924

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Player Two [02/11/23]

Calling Iwanako for advice? Hisao, you have no damn sense of tact. The man is dumb as bricks and I refuse to let him be anything else. :lol: First off, there isn’t a doctor (or friend) in the world who would lead off with “She died,” unless they’re a sadist who hates the person they’re talking to. ...
by Sharp-O
Thu Nov 02, 2023 12:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Getting Good [21/4/24]
Replies: 37
Views: 35924

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Player Two [02/11/23]

“What do you mean ‘she died’ !?” Fuuka all but screams at Rui and it’s taking everything I have to stop my heart from exploding on the spot. My blood ran ice cold when Rui messaged us via Rika’s phone and asked to meet us at the Shanghai. The few other patrons around us look over curiously but Rui h...
by Sharp-O
Mon Oct 30, 2023 10:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ventriloquy - Halloween One-Shot (18+)
Replies: 8
Views: 8445

Re: Ventriloquy - Halloween One-Shot (18+)

Oddball wrote: Mon Oct 30, 2023 9:53 am

Well, that's a wonderfully dark Halloween tale! Great work.

Thanks, Oddball! I'm glad folks have been enjoying it, despite the subject matter.

Oddball wrote: Mon Oct 30, 2023 9:53 am

Although I'd remove "mind control" from your warnings as it gives away things too early.

That's a good shout, doneso

by Sharp-O
Mon Oct 30, 2023 8:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Only You
Replies: 6
Views: 1920

Re: Only You

I echo hdkv's statement, don't rush yourself and only release it when you're happy with it.

by Sharp-O
Sun Oct 29, 2023 11:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Only You
Replies: 6
Views: 1920

Re: Only You

A really solid first outing, Skin. You've clearly got a solid grip on narrative form. Looking forward to what else you might do.

by Sharp-O
Sat Oct 28, 2023 10:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ventriloquy - Halloween One-Shot (18+)
Replies: 8
Views: 8445

Re: Ventriloquy - Halloween One-Shot (18+)

hdkv wrote: Fri Oct 27, 2023 8:53 am

"never ever try to make Sharp-O mad"

Keep telling me I won't kill a character and I'll just do it in more and more asinine ways. We all know what happened to Hisao in Monomyth :lol:

by Sharp-O
Fri Oct 27, 2023 7:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Anarchy from the UK - (Molly one-shot/pilot)
Replies: 10
Views: 5131

Re: Anarchy from the UK - (Molly one-shot/pilot)

I'm so glad I made the time to read this. Molly's interactions with Shizune and Misha are fun to read, and honestly it was kinda scary for her to get into a fight with those jackasses but god, she took them on like a badass. I also find it interesting that it's implied that Hisao somehow made it to...
by Sharp-O
Fri Oct 27, 2023 8:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ventriloquy - Halloween One-Shot (18+)
Replies: 8
Views: 8445

Re: Ventriloquy - Halloween One-Shot (18+)

Happy Halloween to you! Thanks, Spy! It's definitely not something I'd usually do but I remembered a piece of dialogue while thinking of some fun stuff to do with Misah and this spawned in my mind. Happy Halloween to you too! hoo boy this is hardcore I felt pins and needles whole time of reading th...
by Sharp-O
Thu Oct 26, 2023 6:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ventriloquy - Halloween One-Shot (18+)
Replies: 8
Views: 8445

Ventriloquy - Halloween One-Shot (18+)

Content Warning: sexual assault, violence, emotional abuse --------- https://64.media.tumblr.com/97ee72e34850d9ea65c33e7b9fc76a5e/0a0a0dcef735bc7f-77/s540x810/7310818dee27026ef0d9406313928f5ef8a82818.pnj The taste of his tongue on mine is like a foreign umami. The mingled sounds of his grunts and m...
by Sharp-O
Tue Oct 24, 2023 5:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Getting Good [21/4/24]
Replies: 37
Views: 35924

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Ludonarrative Dissonance [24/10/23]

Hunh. Interesting. Maybe a bit too Western-tinged, what with all the open hostility as opposed to covert, but intriguing style of narration all the same. Siiiiillllleeeeeeeennnnnttttt !!! Missed you, buddy! When I decided that Saki would be a habitual liar (either to others or to herself) and decid...
by Sharp-O
Mon Oct 23, 2023 9:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Getting Good [21/4/24]
Replies: 37
Views: 35924

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Ludonarrative Dissonance [24/10/23]

My name is Saki Enomoto and I am full of shit. “So yeah, I can’t wait to get to know you all better and I hope we become good friends!” I cheer, lying through my teeth to an entire room of strangers. Not a single one of them have any goddamn clue how easy that was for me. I bow as the Class 1-1 giv...
by Sharp-O
Fri Oct 20, 2023 10:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 180726

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Two: Touch of Death

hdkv wrote: Thu Oct 19, 2023 9:53 am

And now I'm scared... Hope Rika survives.

Map217 wrote: Thu Oct 19, 2023 10:42 am

Nahhh. Don't do us like this man, I know it's gona hurt.

Feurox wrote: Fri Oct 20, 2023 6:45 am

Now THAT would twist the knife and I would probably come north and give you a big kiss for it, but you’re too good at fluff and lovey dovey stuff to do that ;)

Ehehehehehe....

by Sharp-O
Fri Oct 20, 2023 10:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)
Replies: 34
Views: 10680

Re: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)

While "sentient typewriter" WOULD be an amazing title, as hdkv pointed out I didn't write this quite as quickly as it would seem. I wrote it in about two months back in June and July, but couldn't post here at the time so it was only on Fanfiction.net. That's still quite a clip for someth...
by Sharp-O
Thu Oct 19, 2023 11:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)
Replies: 34
Views: 10680

Re: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)

I guess my title as the sentient typewriter is now yours, Guth, because you got this done in record time! Not only is it wild that you did it so fast, not only is it wild that you wrote a sequel to someone else's story but IT IS WILD that it's good quality and emotionally resonant! Damn! Great work,...
by Sharp-O
Thu Oct 19, 2023 7:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 180726

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Two: Touch of Death

“Okay, Grandpa, room’s all tidy!” I tuck the dusting cloth into the back pocket of my jeans as I rise from my knees and stand proudly before the shrine with my hands on my hips. “Looks good to me!” Hisao cheers and I look over my shoulder to see my boyfriend sitting cross-legged on the wrong side of...