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I'm really hoping Leaty puts some more effort into this. Hey, just FYI, these sorts of comments have a reductive effect on my productivity. I've already finished the rough drafts of the next four chapters. They'll be published as soon as I am convinced they Are Not Shit. Eh, don't worry about him.....

Just read through all of em. Some were great (drunk Lilly, singer Hanako) and some were not so great (fathers day..)

Nevertheless, I enjoyed the stories and I hope to read more from you!

Finally got a chance to read the newest chapter, and it definitely did not dissapoint. As the others have already said, I highly doubt that Lilly would commit suicide.. Also, this "Picnic 2.0" is setting up some potential conflicts involving some cool side characters hmmm.. Fantastic writi...

Loved the finale! The part about Saki's inevitable fate made me quite sad though :\

Nevertheless, a fantastic story that I very much enjoyed

Always a pleasure to read more works in the USM universe. Great job

Holy MOLY. That was beautifully written and I can't wait to read what you come up with next!

That whole fireworks scene was brilliant.. simply brilliant.

Awesome chapter. I loved seeing inside Hanako's mind again. I really hope that she manages to repair her relationship with Lilly though - Hanako's internal monologue was definitely leading her to do this. I can't think of anything else right now (it's so late!).. I'll probably read it again tomorrow...

To be completely honest, I'm still kind of skeptical about Hisao having fallen out of love with her like that, even after everything that has happened. I understand that he's gone through the coping process and everything. I mean, I'm not a certified Love Expert, but that kind of feeling doesn't ju...

Everything that I want to say has already been said, so I'll just say that I loved the newest update and I can't wait for more

You can never have enough Saki and Rika..

Wow. I can honestly say that is not only one of my favourite KS fics, but one of my favourite fics in general. Everything was so well written, the character development was deep, and the pacing was impeccable. As for the ending, you wrapped up everything very nicely. The moment between Akira and her...

Can't help but chime in again for this piece. I re-read it again last night, and it definitely was just as good as I remember. The writing itself was superb. In regards to the actual story, I thought it was very well done. Obviously, some elements of Misha are left out (this fic is only based on Act...

Welp. There goes any possible rekindling between Hisao and Lilly.. I'm pretty sad that that had to happen to my favourite girl, but I can understand why you went down this route. Every chapter has been steering the story more and more towards a Hanako "ending", but I still think that Emi w...

I usually don't reply to this thread.. but after seeing that The Fireman was featured I had to chime in. This fic is hands down one of the best I've ever read. It's a short piece, but the amount of emotion that it brings out is out of this world.

Great story! More people need to write Saki and Rika fics

Keep up the good work!

Fantastic chapter... I was really curious to see what kind of internal dialogue would go on inside Hanako's head after Hisao gave her that gift. Your writing was awesome, as usual