OK, let's just say, I understand, why you had problems writing that scene.
Difficult reading at three in the morning...
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- Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Numbered Days
- Replies: 117
- Views: 58121
- Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Short Alternate Universe... I guess you can call it a scene?
- Replies: 19
- Views: 8299
Re: Short Alternate Universe... I guess you can call it a scene?
I don't know anything about Japanese, Japanese has only two tenses: present and past. [/quote]I just know that Hebrew only has four tenses, and even that's kind of a stretch (past, present, future, and imperative).[/quote] Imperative is not a tense, it's a mood . Most of the times the only way to k...
- Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Short Alternate Universe... I guess you can call it a scene?
- Replies: 19
- Views: 8299
Re: Short Alternate Universe... I guess you can call it a scene?
English has way too many tenses, you know? I do. German has the same number of tenses. Japanese is SO easy in comparison ;-) And about lines that aren't Lilly, that's a very interesting point. Can you elaborate a little more? Because I think that's even more important than the language right now. A...
- Wed Nov 10, 2010 4:06 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What's the girl talk like?
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5646
Re: What's the girl talk like?
Rin wrote:"You know, how she just talks talks talks about nothing for hours. It's like her head is made of bubblegum foam bath jelly."
- Wed Nov 10, 2010 4:00 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Short Alternate Universe... I guess you can call it a scene?
- Replies: 19
- Views: 8299
Re: Short Alternate Universe... I guess you can call it a scene?
Of course, it is his story, but I think his intention was to keep the characters as close to the original as possible.
And for the most part it worked - Lilly is still recognizable as Lilly, but some lines just don't fit her.
And for the most part it worked - Lilly is still recognizable as Lilly, but some lines just don't fit her.
- Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Short Alternate Universe... I guess you can call it a scene?
- Replies: 19
- Views: 8299
Re: Short Alternate Universe... I guess you can call it a scene?
I don't think a story absolutely needs plot. If your goal was to convey feelings and emotions, that's okay, too. I have to agree that there are a lot of things that could be done better. I think the main issue is something you said yourself: When writing a story, it isn't important to write a lot in...
- Tue Nov 09, 2010 3:30 am
- Forum: Blog posts
- Topic: Traduttore = traditore
- Replies: 27
- Views: 18004
Re: Traduttore = traditore
I'd like to add that the most difficult (and fun) part of KS to translate are not Rin's lines but the chapter titles.
Some of those cannot be translated at all; you have to come up with completely new ones.
Some of those cannot be translated at all; you have to come up with completely new ones.
- Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:05 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Katawa Shoujo Folding@Home Team
- Replies: 1026
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Re: Katawa Shoujo Folding@Home Team
For anyone using the GPU client:
There's been an issue with a new core that needs some new dll-files to process correctly.
The files can be found here.
There's been an issue with a new core that needs some new dll-files to process correctly.
The files can be found here.
- Mon Nov 08, 2010 5:11 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: My idea of each KS Girl's fetish
- Replies: 39
- Views: 13961
Re: My idea of each KS Girl's fetish
As the focus of KS is going to be romance, I don't expect to see many (if any) of those in the finished work.
...but wouldn't it be ironic, if Shizune had a voice fetish and never knew?
...but wouldn't it be ironic, if Shizune had a voice fetish and never knew?
- Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:25 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: what are the best quotes from the game?
- Replies: 664
- Views: 229749
Re: what are the best quotes from the game?
By now I think I can recite some passages from memory ^^°trhvmn wrote:I don't seem to remember much from Act 1,...
One of my favourites (not counting Rin) is from Emi:
"I hate warming up too. Heck, and I don't even have to stretch my legs!"
- Tue Nov 02, 2010 4:43 pm
- Forum: Feedback
- Topic: Katawa Shoujo Act 1 Preview feedback thread
- Replies: 991
- Views: 335292
Re: Katawa Shoujo Act 1 Preview feedback thread
I hope you don't mind a triple post^^° Chapter 44 (Throwing Balls): In the previous chapter (Don't Panic) it says that Hisao slept until "almost noon" Then after his encounter with Kenji and meeting Shizune and Misha: "It's still light outside, but the sun is getting ready to set behi...
- Mon Nov 01, 2010 5:16 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What you WOULD have wanted to happen in the story
- Replies: 490
- Views: 157436
Re: What you WOULD want to happen in the story
I think you're fundamentally misunderstanding what I'm arguing for... I'm not. That's exactly what I argued against in my reply to your first post: The problem is, that having a different personality also changes how people react to you, so you'd basically have to have multiple versions of each sce...
- Mon Nov 01, 2010 5:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New stuff of Neuman|| Katawamon: Welcome to Ceridian Forest
- Replies: 101
- Views: 48194
Re: New stuff of Neuman: Katawa Shoujo Halloween Pg.5
Emi in that costume could give perfectly healthy men a heart attack.
It's a wonder Hisao survived...
It's a wonder Hisao survived...
- Mon Nov 01, 2010 5:03 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Rin's Parents.
- Replies: 42
- Views: 13989
Re: Rin's Parents.
I'm not entirely sure about the period, but I think a bit flabby was considered sexy back then...Caesius wrote:Also gray I'm pretty sure renaissance artists went out of their way to leave no doubt that the nude men/boys in their sculptures and paintings were flaccid and avoid sexualizing them.
- Sun Oct 31, 2010 3:11 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What you WOULD have wanted to happen in the story
- Replies: 490
- Views: 157436
Re: What you WOULD want to happen in the story
Nah, she's the "Why would you want to see my stumps?" kind of girl...
Or even the "What stumps?" kind of girl.
Or even the "What stumps?" kind of girl.