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- Fri Sep 15, 2023 5:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
- Replies: 376
- Views: 221545
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Spot of T... & A" 13/9/23
Nice one - fun and unexpected; fertile ground for future stories I'm sure! Also - seems I'm not the only one with dancing on the mind :D sat all on her tod… is this slang? If so, it's from a part of the world I haven't been to. -- Reminds me of some proofreading edits I had back from Lap recently w...
- Sun Sep 10, 2023 10:32 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 184188
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Seven: Judgement Arcana [10/9/23]
Ohhh! Greer chapter, and a surprising way to get out from the Saki Rika confrontation - a good subversion indeed.
Rika will be fighting bears sooner than later if she keeps her smoking up ahah!
Rika will be fighting bears sooner than later if she keeps her smoking up ahah!
- Sun Sep 10, 2023 5:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 30500
Re: An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
Oh this is a lovely, lovely piece. It is so much better than I could have imagined, and gave me unexpected pangs of... longing? at some points. The Taro/Saki thing, for one. And all the cast appearances. And Suzu, written in a way that made me feel such empathy for her. This is a classic, mate. I a...
- Fri Sep 08, 2023 5:04 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
- Replies: 24
- Views: 39294
Re: Secret Santa 2021 - An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go
Here's the link to my prompt for Brythain, nearly 2 years late! (Sorry Bry!)
A lengthy boy, so in its own thread. Enjoy!
An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go
A lengthy boy, so in its own thread. Enjoy!
An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go
- Thu Sep 07, 2023 1:15 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
- Replies: 376
- Views: 221545
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "The Best Woman For The Job" 7/9/23
Honestly I don't think the timing of this one shot could be better! Makes me want to keep writing about Molly, and cheers me right up after my own story ahah! Shizune absolutely is the best for the job, and it feels like a real tour-de-force for the whole crew to get back and turn the school around....
- Thu Sep 07, 2023 6:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Stealthy's Shorts [Newest Addition: Dec. 10th, 2023. - "Dash and Dine"]
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8597
Re: Stealthy's Shorts, One-shots, teasers, and more. [Newest Addition: September 6th, 2023]
Well, that was depressing. And that’s coming from me. Really good work though, oddly sympathetic. I’m always a bit hesitant to write Kenji, because I think he’s not as disconnected from reality as most tend to write him - that said, this level of disconnect works brilliantly - and the hint that he k...
- Thu Sep 07, 2023 6:00 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 30500
An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (Notes On the Story)
Secret Santa Victim: Brythain, Prompt: This is a story about Misha, Saki, a jet fighter, some incense, and a lot of ice cream Brythain’s secret Santa prompt was delivered to me 26th November, 2021. That makes this 2 years late, and also not a Christmas story. So, you’re welcome? I’ve know Byrthain s...
- Thu Sep 07, 2023 5:51 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 30500
An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
Hope and desire, / All unfulfilled, / Have more than rope / And hangman killed. Stevie Smith Here we are. The three musketeers. The three amigos. Three complete strangers. “So, where do you want to go first, Nakai?” Akio asks, tapping his foot impatiently. Ahead of us, dozens of people mill about b...
- Thu Sep 07, 2023 5:48 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 30500
An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
It really is a pathetic thing. To mourn a past you never had. Don't you think? Sunjeev Sahota, The Year of the Runaways “You almost never see that over Yamaku.” Akio points up casually as a formation of jet planes soar above us, leaving a clean slice through the clouds above. “We’re not far from th...
- Thu Sep 07, 2023 5:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 30500
An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/528344844452626452/1149273776903692288/An_Empty_Space.png This is a story about Misha, Saki, a jet fighter, some incense, and a lot of ice cream. Life moves pretty fast. If you don’t stop and look around once in a while,...
- Tue Sep 05, 2023 7:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 184188
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Six: Ukemi [5/9/23]
Another cute instalment, but I think the whole conflict with Saki is difficult to sympathise with Rika, since we haven’t seen her actually be thaaat cruel. Maybe that’s something no that will change though…
- Thu Aug 31, 2023 8:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 184188
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Five: Devil Trigger [31/8/23]
A good chapter! I mean, I’ve already said before that you do melodrama, (not a bad thing, you do it very well!). I found the confrontation with Saki and Rika maybe a touch… exaggerated? Like, Saki has been suggested to be a bit of a bitch (and a bit slutty by Roma’s own words), but like what is the ...
- Sun Aug 27, 2023 2:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 184188
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Four: Labbing [27/8/23]
A great slice of life update! Not much in terms of plot development, just the sort of actualisation of Rika's desire to take her health more seriously! Still a great read, and very cute too. I like that you've written some hesitancy into the more adult related content, especially because its good ch...
- Sat Aug 26, 2023 5:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
- Replies: 35
- Views: 21249
Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 3 August 20th, 2023]
Not another massive comment from me, don't worry! Really enjoying how this is progressing, and it definitely feels like it has a greater narrative focus now, maybe because things have been established and you're clearly more confident in your style. (Or more confident with your Stiles...) Either way...
- Fri Aug 25, 2023 6:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 184188
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Three: No Johns [22/8/23]
Finally all caught up, again. :lol: It’s really great that you’re back, and Rika is just such a pleasure! So much sugar, and the drama is done very well, even if at times it feels a bit mellow dramatic. Teenagers are little cringey goblins though, so who’s to complain! A brilliant ensemble too! Also...