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Well, that was interesting. Makes me wonder if maybe Miya is asexual.

Kotori needs to grow up, come out, and raise mongooses (mongoosi?) with Misha.

You're well on your way to turning this into a relationship clusterfuck on the scale of Ranma 1/2.

I liked it! I agree with Mirage that it was a little too detailed and measured out though, especially at the very beginning. What bothered me though is that I don't find Rin's work (what we see of it anyway) being particularly Picaso-ish. Angular forms, yes, but I don't see any of Picasso's projecti...

It's about time for Hanako to return. She's fiendishly difficult to write as well, but for different reasons: it's voice. Actually this update seems like a really close example to how I picture Hanako in my mind's eye in terms of her brooding loneliness and perhaps a bit of a morbid imagination, bu...

I'm happy to see an update, though this update doesn't make me at all happy.

Mirage_GSM wrote:Does that mean you're discontinuing the story and are just posting your remaining notes?

Seems like more of an interlude to me.

Also, Rin being so obviously concerned that someone has given up being understood is a simple but profound moment and I'm irrationally angry at Emi for interrupting.

Decent enough start, but you'll have to actually develop some sort of plot to keep me interested.

Well that was a fun surprise today. Swimsuit shopping with Akira is never a bad time, even if jerkass parents try to put a damper on the mood.

yep, different can be good. I'll keep an eye on this.

Hmm. My thought was that she was mocking the 'normal' people who would be visiting, specifically by showing them what she thinks they expect to see when they visit the school if all the politeness was stripped away... just an endless menagerie of mishapped people. In all that distraction it can be h...

Miki is correct, this OC is an assbutt. Possibly salvageable though. Yes, but his change of heart came directly after discovering the papers in the trash, so my first asssumption was that the two things were related; that he was nicer because of what he found in the trash. Possibly because he was ac...

I was inspired by the beta storyline where Misha also gets hit by a car There was no such storyline in the beta. He's referring to the 'work in progress' draft that came to light a while back, not something that was officially intended for release. I would assume the two Rin fics Bagheera is referr...

DanjaDoom wrote:discreet lesbianism?

I think you meant potential discreet lesbianism, since she seems unsure about whether to go for it or not. Then again, she also may be hot for teacher...?

How hard would it be to just cut the posts per page down to 12 or 10? It's probably just some arbitrary number that can be switched in the admin panel, and doing so would give more wiggle room before things go wrong.

Hey man no need to feel guilty... just write if and when you want. It's your car, we're just along for the ride.