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by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 04, 2023 2:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Getting Good [21/4/24]
Replies: 37
Views: 38619

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Okiagari [30/11/23]

Damn, I sure hope I will never have a doctor like Rika's mom... And she did that not once but twice! "Sir, I regret to have to inform you that there have been complications with the birth of your daughter... As a consequence she did not start breathing... until the nurse slapped her on the behi...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 03, 2023 8:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)
Replies: 34
Views: 11867

Re: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)

So... It stretches credulity a bit that Emi would still be affected this much after so much time... As I was forming this [...] But in the end, I decided it would be more powerful to have them help one another than it would be for one of them to guide the other. People really do struggle with traum...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 03, 2023 4:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hex Girls - Halloween One-Shot (Shizune)
Replies: 4
Views: 3787

Re: Hex Girls - Halloween One-Shot (Shizune)

hdkv wrote: Wed Nov 01, 2023 4:01 am

Rin always comes to the places when no one expect her to.

Nobody expects the Spanish Rinquisition 8)

Never heard of the Hex girls, though. They probably weren't in the old seasons of Scooby Doo I watched as a kid...

by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 03, 2023 2:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Anarchy from the UK - (Molly one-shot/pilot)
Replies: 10
Views: 5830

Re: Anarchy from the UK - (Molly one-shot/pilot)

Street Fighter - Yamaku Edition :-) I always enjoy seeing a different take on characters than what they usually are like, so this ticks all the right boxes. I do agree with Scramblers that the colloquialisms are a bit over the top... Imo, less would be more in this case. SPaG I don’t know whose who'...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 03, 2023 1:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Don't Leave Me Behind: The story of Hara Iwanako [chapter 3: 22.10.2023]
Replies: 8
Views: 4205

Re: Don't Leave Me Behind: The story of Hara Iwanako [chapter 3: 22.10.2023]

The question, that I trying to answer here: what if Iwanako didn't gave up? What if she tries to pursue Hisao after his stay in hospital? Okay, when I read this I did not expect she would (inadvertently) throw herself in front of a truck to "pursue" him. :-) Overall a very nice start. Not...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 03, 2023 1:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)
Replies: 34
Views: 11867

Re: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)

So... It stretches credulity a bit that Emi would still be affected this much after so much time, but setting that aside, Emis problem and Hisao's experiences with Saki do synergize nicely. Good job on realizing that and making it into a story! I'm not sure if it was intentional, but 16 years after ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 03, 2023 10:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 21548

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 3 August 20th, 2023]

Honestly it's been a long-held small bit of anxiety seeing your presence around the forums before now and anticipating your response to my writing. Welcome back and glad to see you here! Thanks for the consideration. I'm slowly working my way through the stuff I missed. Yours took me a while to get...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 02, 2023 7:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 21548

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 3 August 20th, 2023]

It's been a while since this has been posted, and Feurox already made most of the more important points, but since you clearly put a lot of effort in this I want to give at least a bit of feedback. At first I felt that the accident just two days after the end of the main story was laying on the dram...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 01, 2023 9:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
Replies: 28
Views: 60897

Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection

Seasonal Greatings everyone! It's time for the annual Secret Santa ! The prompts have been sent out; so I'm opening the collection thread now. As always using this thread to post your story is encouraged but not mandatory. If you decide to post it elsewhere I will just put up the link the the story ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Nov 30, 2023 4:34 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Arrhythmia & Coffein
Replies: 4
Views: 12248

Arrhythmia & Coffein

Saw a video earlier about the case of a woman with arrhythmia who died after drinking a (heavily) caffeinated lemonade and the legal ramifications. I don't know either the drink or the company, and I can't judge whether or not they did enough to warn about the content of their drink, but imo if the ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Nov 23, 2023 5:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 184853

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Two: Touch of Death

It was the first thing in my mind when you mentioned she didn't know her dad: She seemed to get along so well with Hisao's dad, that it would make it quite ironic, and the two DO have similar congenital conditions... Not that I advocate for a plot turn like that, mind you. It would still be a very b...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 21, 2023 9:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 184853

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Two: Touch of Death

So, it has been a while since I read the start of this series. I know I should restart from the beginning, but right now I'm trying to catch up with all the stuff that was posted since I was last here, so that will have to wait. It does mean that I don't really remember OCs like Fuuka, though... A f...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 21, 2023 2:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 1034437

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/12)

It's called "Yamaku Academy".
Not sure if you need an invite to join, but I'll tag this post there, so someone should contact you.

by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 17, 2023 5:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 1034437

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/12)

First of all, congratulations on your engagement. Second, congrats on being finally on the home stretch with this story - probably the longest running story around here. The mood has been sober for a while now, and it has been clear for a while that the story is not headed for a rainbows and sunshin...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Nov 16, 2023 1:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Trapped all the Same - An unfulfilled SS20 Prompt for Lap
Replies: 13
Views: 9106

Re: Trapped all the Same - An unfulfilled SS20 Prompt for Lap

Okay, having “made it through that some 20K words” – I can say two things: You again didn’t manage to write a short story and You again managed to write a damn good one. Okay, I can say a bit more… Having read this story end to end with “Empty Space” they do feel quite similar. There are (surprising...