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FluffandCrunch wrote:

Mahorfeus wrote:

Otakumon wrote:Good story, but why is Mutuo beating himself up about calling Hisao's parents? That's the principal's job.

The principal is a luchador. His fingers are too muscular to hit those pesky buttons.

That's what I was going for!

I just figured it was because Mutou was Hisao's homeroom teacher. :\

The doctors had said that his heart would be the end of him, but he didn't expect the end to come like this. Hisao closed his eyes and turned his head away from the man. “ Pathetic .” Hisao shivered at the memory of the tone of that voice. That cold, unfeeling, hollow tone. “ Your form begs you to ...

Ooooh... 10th Doctor uses the Chameleon Arch (again) and goes into the life of "Akio Mutou" for a while? Or does he stay normal and keeps an eye on things at Yamaku, taking a break from his travels? Hm... this could be fun.

This is not how I thought the ending would go at all. I figured the saishoudoukin thing was just a joke at first, but I guess it didn't really turn out that way in the end anyway. I think you took the ending too quickly, and I don't want to say I'm disappointed, but all of the conflict just sort of...

I must both curse and applaud you, Megumeru. I just read all of Hisao's lines in Johnny Bravo's voice. Damn.

Oddball wrote:Well, at least I know she likes me. … Now I'll just have to wait and see if she'll ever talk to me again.

Best line in the whole one-shot. I lol'd greatly.

I have to butt in here and note that this is either going to be a depressing disaster – or a hell of a setup for a happy ending. Think about it rationally based on the medical facts we have in front of us – Lilly cannot have a child because of something physically wrong with her womb – that means t...

Mahorfeus wrote:For some reason Saki's repetitive use of "darling" had me laughing.

I didn't so much laugh at the repeated use, but kept imagining her saying it in exaggerated English.

Was just about to hit "Submit" on a post about how I figured this was after Hanako's Neutral End and I looked up to the thread title and seen it spelled out right in front of me. Herp-a-derp it's bed time. :lol: I could swear, though, that I recall Hisao and Hanako being on good enough ter...

Then I hear a loud gasp. Our eyes spring open simultaneously and bind one another. Rika’s crimson eyes are glowing with sheer terror, her mouth gasping for air. I can almost see my own expression reflected on hers. She lunges forward and wraps her arms around me, weeping. I clutch her tightly to my...

Doomish.

You are bloody effin' EVIL.

Listening to that song you hidden in the story while reading the end = Manly Tears.

I just KNOW that after each of these fics, this is Doomish:

I figure I should get chapter 2 out now before I get any more ideas and try to change the story more than it needs to be. In this chapter, you're going to see just how stupid our main character can be at times. <Story Snip for quote.> And there it is. My newness to writing is definitely showing her...

Nice start, I'm looking forward to more chapters. I'm starting to wonder if it's not Hisao. All we know for sure is that the main character is a male, was out very late at night, doesn't remember his name or those of family/friends, and he knows a blind girl. I don't think doctors would be careless ...

themocaw wrote:<snip> ...not Professor Akio Mutou's diatribes. "You're going to be fantastic." <snip>

A Ninth Doctor reference for the Tenth Doctor look-alike. I see what you did there.

I had the same reaction Shizune did at the end once I realized what was going on. Well played, sir. Well played indeed.