Katawa Shoujo Forums

Like I said, I probably had missed something. In this case, the fact that Hanako was the narrator completely went over my head. The whole disassociated conscious was apparently too subtle for me.

Well this was... strange. I'm a bit confused. Is this supposed to be some meta Wreck It Ralph type thing where all video game characters wind up in the same hospital? Sorry if I totally missed the point (it happens a lot).

The look he favors me with is both bemused and surprised at the same time. Before I can tell him so, though, he opens his mouth . [Not as many as you have, apparently. Maybe you're the perverted one of us, after all.] Minor quibble, but this makes it sound like he's speaking. That aside, your writi...

Req wrote: -She then finds out why it happened, he had a weak heart and she caused the infarction I don’t believe for one second that anyone would be evil enough to her that she caused it, even if they were thinking it. High schoolers are dicks. I can totally see a nasty rumor going around the scho...

Bit late to the party, but that last piece of absurd fiction was absolutely brilliant. This ranks up there with Munch's self-insert fic for making me actually laugh.

I don't know what it says that I read a story about a limbless psychic and a high school teacher fighting off terrorists in the past and think, "This is only barely ridiculous." But these are fun, competent shorts and always worth a chuckle.

The other problem: Apostrophes - too many in some places, too few in others. Apostrophes are my arch rival, I will try my best to deal with them in future. I’ve fixed what you pointed out, thanks for doing that. Fancy being a proofreader? :lol: Also, if you ever need an extra proofreader for gramma...

You know, you're kind of the crippled fan fiction equivalent of Arthur C. Clarke... That's interesting. So far I've heard Ray Bradbury as well. Quite the honour; thank you! Volume wise he may be more of an Asimov... I think Apacalypse summed up my feelings quite well with slightly confused, but &qu...

I thought this was really well written and an enjoyable interaction. Any reason why you decided to set it during their first year? I kind of imagined that Hanako was even more (internally) bitter and gun shy her first year than in the VN.

YES! This is exactly what I wanted to see after your last Shizune-Hanako story. At first blush, the two of them roleplaying seems far-fetched, but after letting it sit for just a moment it kind of makes perfect sense. In my head, I've always seen Hanako truly taking to online gaming and with her int...

I notice other happy pairs around us, and I feel small, we are just two more broken specs lost in the void. Pretty sure you mean specks . I only point it out cause I became amused imagining Miki/Ayumu as a broken pair of eyeglasses drifting through space surrounded by happy glasses. I liked this ch...

Atario wrote:

Munchenhausen wrote:New headcanon that Kenji believes Bowling is the manliest sport of all

That's actually canon…

That's actually just a fact...

Damn it Blank, you responded too quickly. Now my answer is going to boil down to "What Blank said, but less eloquently." But I'm fairly certain my mental process wouldn't go 'Here's an idea, drunk, celebrations, coma'. If anything, drinking would only serve to lessen my resistance to trage...

I'm not going to complain about the story not advancing when the aside is that entertaining. I really enjoyed this, I feel like Yamaku would be ripe with student ghost stories. Thanks for the feedback! I have idea’s for a few more ghost stories, but they will have to wait to be one shots. Though Ry...

I'm not going to complain about the story not advancing when the aside is that entertaining. I really enjoyed this, I feel like Yamaku would be ripe with student ghost stories.