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The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. I chose Rika x Miki and the place as a "competition" Enjoy! YAMAKU GO! Rika smirked as she l...

Anyways more onto a review. I think this was pretty good. I liked the concept; the idea of kinda an emotionless blowjob that might come from a place where they are trying to mend from what happened soon before is a story thread you don't often see. It's a very Nuke thing to write, and I like it. You...

Thank you both for your kind words! They are very much appreciated! Been working on this one for a while, hopefully with no grammar errors. Dedicated to a certain someone who said there isn't enough Misha. Enjoy! MUTUAL FINISH Hisao glanced up at the clock above the blackboard. The last few minutes ...

Initial thoughts: I like it. It was a nice little friendship building scene imo. There are some places where you chose words that I would not have chosen. As far as I know though, you have a good grasp on proper grammar, so I'm going to boil that down to a stylistic choice rather than an error. I th...

Cute chapters, quite enjoyed them. Excited to see what's next. Bonus Content - Hisao and Hanako's Chess Game Then you can step through the game at your leisure and analyse all the blunders and inaccuracies that only two chess beginners can make. Damn man, you really had to do them like that ? :lol:

Jeez man, Lilly can't catch a break. It was an interesting concept. The video thing was a nice shock twist, but I don't know how I feel about this. I know you were writing a meme, but it was just kinda standard at this point. I feel your pain about the pairings (mine weren't great either). Technical...

The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that this f...

I enjoyed this. Very intriguing to me, had me checking back in earlier paragraphs to see what had changed and what hadn't changed.

SPaG errors, as pointed out earlier, but other than that, nice work!

Aww. I really have enjoyed LR so far, and I like the inclusion of Hanako into the group. I'm also interested to see how the situation around Rin and Hisao's condition plays out. I'm glad I got to proofread this, so you've gotten most of my comments already, but I felt it would be good to comment on ...

PsychicSpy is very perceptive. Almost ... too perceptive. Are you some kind of spy? A ... psychic spy? Funny you mention Kenji, I think I pulled the username from a Kenji line in For Want of a Nail (even though I don't like Kenji). But onto your most recent batch of chapters. First off, I really li...

As far as chapter 3 goes, I like the way you went with it. Everyone's feeling kinda shitty, but still trying to repent. Choosing Bluebells as the flower of choice was pretty good. I liked chapter four better. I think it did better character development honestly. I think that the Rin and Emi exchange...

Whew, that was a doozy. A lot of feels in a few sittings. I promised a review, so I figured I would go ahead and type it out. I'll take your stories one by one, outside of 8 years, which I have already reviewed and the contest entries. Ekephrasis Interesting take. The reader is pleasantly surprised ...

Wow. Since I've joined the community, I've heard a lot about Riposte. Now that I've read it and thought about it, I figured I would share my thoughts. I will say: Rika is unlikable in the early chapters. Kinda a dickhead, but if I'm being honest, I have dated a Rika. Personally, I ended up wounded f...

Not going to hold you, I've been waiting for this story to be posted. This is probably the best story from you Nuke. The discord had a conversation about attributing things to authors outside their intent if they don't state it. So I'd say the thing that this story draws me because I can't tell if w...

This story looks really promising. I did feel that the possibility of a stress induced attack from this may have been possible, and It's cool to see somebody pick up the mantle of making that happen.

I'm looking forward to seeing more of it!