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by Skeeve
Fri Sep 04, 2015 11:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moments in Time [Not Quite One Shots]
Replies: 37
Views: 18015

Re: Moments in Time [One Shots]

Thanks! I've never actually written romance before, so I'm trying to branch out a little.
by Skeeve
Fri Sep 04, 2015 11:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 90059

Re: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)

It's human nature, I think. No one likes to think about the inevitability of death, and it hurts to be forced to look at it head on.

In case I haven't said so, this is really excellent writing, even if it's hard to read at points. :D
by Skeeve
Thu Sep 03, 2015 2:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 90059

Re: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)

Fuck, this one hit me hard, and I thought Lilly's was bad. A reminder, perhaps, that no matter how soon we lift ourselves above the specter of death, it won't have been soon enough.

I hope I can bring myself to read the rest of this soon.
by Skeeve
Thu Sep 03, 2015 11:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#73—'Stripping')
Replies: 324
Views: 297473

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (37—'Course Selections') (2015090

Is it a bad thing that I really *really* want to take both of those classes?
by Skeeve
Wed Sep 02, 2015 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moments in Time [Not Quite One Shots]
Replies: 37
Views: 18015

Re: Moments in Time [One Shots]

Aftershocks (NSFWish) I smiled lightly as Emi shifted her shoulders a little, trying to get more comfortable under my arm. It drew my attention away from the movie we were trying to watch, but then I’d long since lost track of what was going on with it anyway. Emi had her prosthetics propped up agai...
by Skeeve
Mon Aug 31, 2015 10:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 880717

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Update: Aug/Sep—Hanako)

There was something that rubbed me the wrong way about Loose Leaf on first reading. It's very competently written, and it gave me a little bit of the warm fuzzies, but the whole piece seemed to hint at this whole journey of self-discovery for Hanako, and I think I wanted to read excerpts from that s...
by Skeeve
Sun Aug 30, 2015 7:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moments in Time [Not Quite One Shots]
Replies: 37
Views: 18015

Re: Moments in Time [One Shots]

This one was rattling around in my head ever since I caught a Zatoichi film the other day, and is... uh, let's say "heavily inspired by" the final swordfight. I've always been kind of a sucker for 'what if' style stories, where you drop people from one setting into another and see what hap...
by Skeeve
Sun Aug 30, 2015 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moments in Time [Not Quite One Shots]
Replies: 37
Views: 18015

Re: Moments in Time [One Shots]

Parallel Works: Satou Lilly Challenged (With apologies to Shintaro Katsu, Kenji Misumi, and, really, everyone who reads this) The snow fell softly, wreathing the grounds of Yamaku in a peaceful blanket of white as Lilly hurried me around the outside walls, Hanako’s arm wrapped around one of my own. ...
by Skeeve
Sat Aug 29, 2015 8:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 81339

Re: Swampie's Stories: A new one-shot! 29/8/15

Not gonna like, at first I thought Hisao was cheating on Lilly. I was relieved to see it was just a tea thing, even though I'm not really a big fan of the stuff(Go Team Water!). Are you kidding? He WAS cheating on Lilly! When your girlfriend has a speciality, you don't just go and share that meal w...
by Skeeve
Sat Aug 29, 2015 4:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 81339

Re: Swampie's Stories: A new one-shot! 29/8/15

...too late. It got weirder. :mrgreen:
by Skeeve
Sat Aug 29, 2015 4:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 81339

Re: Swampie's Stories: A new one-shot! 29/8/15

The Tea Wars: A Battle is Brewing For that pun, you deserve death, but the writing has earned you a stay of execution. I can't help but feel bad for Hisao, even if he's ultimately responsible for this situation himself by straying. But to be denied for a whole week, not to taste that hot, sweet nec...
by Skeeve
Sat Aug 29, 2015 12:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 130017

Re: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/Testament (Complete)

I've always liked the idea of a story told multiple times, from multiple points of view, although considering the subject matter I should have expected the barrage of melancholy. I'm not too proud to admit that this is the one that broke me a little; when I got to Lilly reading the inscription in th...
by Skeeve
Sat Aug 29, 2015 8:12 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shit that Pisses Lilly Off
Replies: 43
Views: 31972

Re: Shit that Pisses Lilly Off

And its controversial sequels, Stare Wars: The Glaucoma Strikes Back and Stare Wars: Return of the Cataract
by Skeeve
Fri Aug 28, 2015 10:13 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shit that Pisses Lilly Off
Replies: 43
Views: 31972

Re: Shit that Pisses Lilly Off

Don't leave, naturally.
by Skeeve
Fri Aug 28, 2015 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63317

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 28/08/15)

... Kenji is legally blind, which pretty much precludes him from driving a car ... Not a problem; I'm pretty sure you can get seeing-eye dogs for this these days. In all seriousness, this is riveting stuff and I'm enjoying it greatly. I'm kind of getting a Blues-Brotherish 'lets get the band back t...