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- Fri Apr 20, 2012 12:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 79149
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up
Cool, cool :) So any other tips about the chapter? Like I said, this is my first big story in a while, I'm definitely not perfect, lol Having Lizard get caught stalking Rika every now and then would be more in character for him than say ranting at D&D. But if you're going to keep him in D&D...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 10:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 79149
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up
Really? Huh, that's weird, the wiki pretty much described him as being a big narcissist. Bah. Yeah, he is presented as a narcissist in the game, but that's just how it appears since you are playing as Lenneth. If you look at it out of Lenneth's view, he appears as just obsessed over Lenneth herself...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 10:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 79149
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up
Lezard would actually be the opposite of a narcissist since in Valkyrie Profile he really doesn't go on about himself. He only obsesses on Lenneth.DanjaDoom wrote:
Nice, nice. I did get the basic attributes down (Lezard is a narcissist ,Lelouch is a schemer, etc.) and just flanderized the hell out of them, heh
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 8:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 79149
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up
true,lol. Gaah,this was a weak chapter overall. Ah well, every writer has his bad day =/ Just remember that the more the reality is stretched for comedy the more outlandish the characters have to be to make it fit. Take K-On for example. No student in their right mind calls their teacher "sawa...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 7:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: My first fanart
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4792
Re: My first fanart
Pool cue is a lil bent, but it's hard to draw straight lines without a ruler. Cue ball isn't perfect, but circles are really damn hard to draw free hand. Don't be afraid of using instruments to draw. It's pretty realistic actually. When was the last time you went to a bar and the pool cue's were ac...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 7:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 79149
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up
true,lol. Gaah,this was a weak chapter overall. Ah well, every writer has his bad day =/ Just remember that the more the reality is stretched for comedy the more outlandish the characters have to be to make it fit. Take K-On for example. No student in their right mind calls their teacher "sawa...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 7:24 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What do you think about voice acting in KS?
- Replies: 78
- Views: 26917
Re: What do you think?
I'm one of them types that requires native language of the story location. Meaning KS would end up Japanese if voiced. I tend to have a very jarring disconnect from VNs, and anime when they are dubbed in english. Even movies shot by Hollywood do the same. Like the story happens in Russia, but everyo...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 12:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
- Replies: 198
- Views: 79149
Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 3 now up
DanjaDoom wrote:For me to make a joke...hehMirage_GSM wrote:I do not thi k they would give foreign students harder english tests... What would be the purpose?
might work better with a punchline from the teacher lol
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 12:06 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
- Replies: 4862
- Views: 1426008
Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
It'd be bittersweet, but it doesn't change the fact that she turned him down.Tomate wrote:I am no romantic, but, as Tennyson wrote "Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all"
Imagining how much it would hurt dating someone knowing they will be gone shortly...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 12:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
- Replies: 124
- Views: 44297
Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 8 up)
Well, Hanako coulda have tried to massage Hisao's pancreas to force an erection
I'm just saying, it's still pretty vanilla, even with a poopy vibrator.
...God I'm so internet corrupted lol
I'm just saying, it's still pretty vanilla, even with a poopy vibrator.
...God I'm so internet corrupted lol
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 11:46 am
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: My first fanart
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4792
Re: My first fanart
If you want me to cretique it like my art teacher use to... cloth wrinkles, check general proportions, check drawn in pencil, check Pool cue is a lil bent, but it's hard to draw straight lines without a ruler. Cue ball isn't perfect, but circles are really damn hard to draw free hand. Don't be afrai...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 11:32 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
- Replies: 124
- Views: 44297
Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 8 up)
I don't know, this last one just felt, well. I'd say "fucked up" but I've seen worse in that respect, but it was kind of disturbing. Even with the fact that Hanako is as horny as a rabbit in this fic. Though, it was funny as hell, so props for that. Drunk people, Mahorfeus, drunk people. ...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 11:28 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Curious little experience I had today.
- Replies: 52
- Views: 14440
Re: Curious little experience I had today.
Really? Which one have you tried? I like what I've seen of ASL so far. It's clever and efficient. Many signs are symbolic too: hours, minutes and seconds look like clock movements while the signs for parts of the day remind me of the position of the sun in the sky. I really wish I had proper profes...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 11:17 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
- Replies: 4862
- Views: 1426008
Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
I think this is why Lilly's path had such an emotional tie to me because I am in the EXACT same boat as Hisao and I can relate to his feelings, a girl that I have strong feelings for just leaving me and the country to be with her family, it was like Lilly's path was based on that event of my life. ...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 10:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 12+epilogue. Finished)
- Replies: 124
- Views: 44297
Re: Hanako's Honeymoon (erotic) (part 8 up)
I look out the windowI look out tough the window in the direction in which the young man went.
or
I look out through the window
Though, the first one is more correct.
as for the chapter overall, it was pretty funny to read.