No, neither of those influenced me much. I was expecting Bill & Ted.Rhodri wrote:All I have to say is to this good news is Excellent.
You were expecting Mister Burns weren't you?
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- Tue Sep 30, 2014 2:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
- Replies: 351
- Views: 203854
Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 5/8]
- Tue Sep 30, 2014 2:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
- Replies: 99
- Views: 52403
Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection
I could see Hisao becoming a literature major being an influence of Hanako.
- Mon Sep 29, 2014 11:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 112
- Views: 49525
Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/29
Is this a result of correcting what Mirage pointed out, or did he miss this one?Hoitash wrote:Even though the summer air was slightly cooler at night, it still humid, and beads of sweat formed on their bodies, clinging to their clothes and hair.
- Sun Sep 28, 2014 5:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 81598
Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 7 up!
Agreed that Shizune’s reaction is over the top. Japan has a strong social pressure against such public displays of affection. As people have mentioned before, your writing is quite good, but could use polishing. It’s never to the point that your meaning isn’t clear, but it does draw me a bit out of ...
- Thu Sep 25, 2014 9:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
- Replies: 99
- Views: 52403
Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection
My, what a lovely shade of violet this story has!
- Tue Sep 23, 2014 11:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 141017
Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 9/19)
Well, ‘whoa’ is spelled like what I just wrote, not ‘woah’.acquireTigris wrote:Since there are no grammatical or spelling errors (so far), I'll leave the chapter as it is.
- Tue Sep 23, 2014 10:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 159
- Views: 65713
Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 9/18)
That is correct.Mirage_GSM wrote:I think griffon's comment was about the grammar...That woulda been off-screen, as I haven't yet written anything involving Soon-hee's time at Yamaku (not counting the first half of Chapter One.)
- Mon Sep 22, 2014 10:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 159
- Views: 65713
Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 9/18)
I was worried they’d keep me at a distant, but they accepted me pretty much right away. Where was she worried about being kept? I nodded, “I enjoy it, and now that the first years have suffered the humiliation of being beaten by someone who’s seventy kilograms soaking wet, a lot easier to manage.” ...
- Fri Sep 19, 2014 5:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 112
- Views: 49525
Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/15
Four days and no comments? You deserve much more than to be ignored for this chapter. Anyway, I really liked this. The way Misha and Lynda interact is positively lovely. Even when Lynda thinks their date is taking place on the set of The Godfather . Lynda nodded, “Yeah, it’s gone a lot better than I...
- Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 159
- Views: 65713
Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 9/12)
I really enjoy the little hints to various noodle incidents you include.
Dates are not possessives.Hoitash wrote:resent location in the 1920’s
Still aren’t.Hoitash wrote:Built in the 1920’s as part of the move
Oh, so close to not having any of these.Hoitash wrote:Hisao nodded, “There President was our Student Council Treasurer.
- Fri Sep 12, 2014 12:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 141017
Re: Unmasked
Okay, glad I skipped ahead to find out other readers’ reactions to the choice point; no need to go into that. That’s a really shitty move on Miki’s part to make a test like that. Her brother gave her lousy advice. The air conditioning hit me, its contrast to the warm spring air of the early night ou...
- Mon Sep 08, 2014 6:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 141017
Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 9/7)
My favorite way of putting it is: “It erred on the side of clarity.”acquireTigris wrote:I assumed it was obvious from the chapter. It's too late now. I can't delete it. Oh well.Mirage_GSM wrote:You shouldn't tell us that ahead of time...
- Sun Sep 07, 2014 7:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 896782
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Whiskey, Saki, ...)
It’s more apparent if you read the stories in his pastebin. I refer to them as ‘FluffandCrunch’s Lilly Good-End Stories’, though I can’t recall if that’s the official title or if I made it up.Mirage_GSM wrote:I never even realized F&C's stories were supposed to be in the same continuity ^^°
- Fri Sep 05, 2014 11:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 112
- Views: 49525
Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/1
It was exciting enough. I liked it.
You seem to have an extra verb here.Hoitash wrote:He was ended up so deep in thought he almost missed his line trying swim away from him.
- Fri Aug 29, 2014 4:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yin and Yang, Hideaki x Miki "Route"
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5793
Re: Yin and Yang, Hideaki x Miki "Route"
I disagree. Shizune X Rin is much less plausible.Zarys wrote:A new level of absurd pairing is reached...only a Hanako X Jigoro fanfic can do better. (and if the fanfic is good, not so uncredible, thus it would be awesome, I propose a title : The Scared and the Beast )